Recent Comments

david
8/16/19, 6:08 AM
Wow! That was so hot! And it felt absolutely authentic. The story progressed pretty much like a real extended induction. i have quite a lot of experience as a hypnosis subject. i find that written inductions are generally less efficient than audio, due i think to the mental focus required to read and the way that focus disturbs any growing trance. Nevertheless this story flowed well and the plot felt like it created enough interest to encourage continued focus and continued reading, and at the same time camouflaged the inductive effect of the words for the reader. Not quite sure if my reaction proves this perspective, since i didn't manage to get as far as the command to cum before i actually came. i only made it to the line, “And since I control your cock, and your cock is the center of your pleasure, and obedience is pleasure, you obey me right?”. Needless to say i would love to read more of this story, and more of your writing generally. So many of the stories on this site leave me feeling like they omitted a very important part of the story -- how the mind control is achieved. You however were so very detailed and open in your representation of the method of induction used by Mark on Connor. i think i found just how effective his method was by falling for it myself. BRAVO! Thanks so much for this great story. ~david
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:42 AM
Can't wait. Loved this story! Great!!!
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:41 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:41 AM
Getting better. Keep it coming!!!
Stephen
8/16/19, 3:31 AM
That is a great story. The intro really set it up beautifully. You have an extrodinary talent. Three cheers. ;-)
Anonymous
8/16/19, 2:48 AM
When is part 4 dropping?
Anonymous
8/16/19, 2:33 AM
I hope this story continues, so well written and hot!
8/16/19, 1:12 AM
My energy levels have been very low these last few months, but there's more to come when I can. I can't make promises as to when, as my health is not always cooperative.
8/16/19, 12:45 AM
I would have definitely gone kinkier with this, or lengthened out the ending just a bit. I love the story and definitely got off to it, but I would love to see more with the idea.
Mdlftr
8/15/19, 11:23 PM
What an introductory paragraph - descriptive, funny, pornographic - it sets the reader up for the story to cum = I’m the bulky linebacker from every football fantasy. I’m the powerlifter with the thick middle, the heavy legs, and the hulking traps. I’m the pecs. Oh, my lord God, I’m the pecs. Blocky and strong, thick and square, they dominate my upper body. No matter how wide my shoulders might be now, no matter how peaked my biceps, no matter how rounded the bottom of my gut, nothing can pull focus from my chest. No saggy man-breasts or puffy bitch-tits – like this morning – only tight, strong skin, nipples so firm they look stretched. Laughing to myself, flexing in the mirror, bouncing the halves of my prize back and forth, I think, “THIS is the reason you should always drink your milk.” Excellent!