Recent Comments

Mdlftr
8/15/19, 11:23 PM
What an introductory paragraph - descriptive, funny, pornographic - it sets the reader up for the story to cum = I’m the bulky linebacker from every football fantasy. I’m the powerlifter with the thick middle, the heavy legs, and the hulking traps. I’m the pecs. Oh, my lord God, I’m the pecs. Blocky and strong, thick and square, they dominate my upper body. No matter how wide my shoulders might be now, no matter how peaked my biceps, no matter how rounded the bottom of my gut, nothing can pull focus from my chest. No saggy man-breasts or puffy bitch-tits – like this morning – only tight, strong skin, nipples so firm they look stretched. Laughing to myself, flexing in the mirror, bouncing the halves of my prize back and forth, I think, “THIS is the reason you should always drink your milk.” Excellent!
Mdlftr
8/15/19, 11:11 PM
I LOVE some of the phrasing: - It took all of my eating skills just to finish him. - The shorts are white with black blotches – “Dalmatian” the ad-copy read – to me, it looks like cow-hide - -“Tell me how happy you are, faggot. Get to the thank-you’s.” Excellent writing, Absman420! As always!
Mdlftr
8/15/19, 11:00 PM
Great to see my second-favorite pec muscle story = Milk Man the original - was the first! Thanks for re-posting! Great character development, implicit humor and sexy muscle!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 6:10 PM
This has become my favorite series on this site! Please keep it going!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 4:55 PM
I cant help but feel a little bad for the characters, even though theyre happy theyve still lost their original identities. Well see how Parker feels when he finds out whats happened again that hes lost his job and passion. Still, seeing the men in love is so nice and the changes are hot. Keep at it
Arrowtothekneeblr
8/15/19, 2:54 PM
I jumped for joy when I saw there was a new pollination story. Loved the new exciting twist and can't wait to see where it leads :D
8/15/19, 2:31 PM
Wow. Well done. The two of them being in love does make it better. So does the fact that when they were alone in the house, their minds reverted. Very clever to have Thomas come over and that break the relief from the changes they’d had. Very hot. I can’t wait to read more.
LongtimeFan
8/15/19, 2:12 PM
Amazing stuff! The transformations are achingly hot, the writing is top notch, and it's nice to see changes happening in a story that come from a positive place (don't get me wrong, I love the stories about aliens and genies and sentient plants, but every once in a while you want to see some *happy* transformations). :p And you've combined two of my biggest buttons--preppy and gymnast. Mmmmmm... ;p
Happy Endings
8/15/19, 1:26 PM
I'm a simple man. I see preppy, I upvote. Well done!