Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
8/15/19, 2:12 PM
Amazing stuff! The transformations are achingly hot, the writing is top notch, and it's nice to see changes happening in a story that come from a positive place (don't get me wrong, I love the stories about aliens and genies and sentient plants, but every once in a while you want to see some *happy* transformations). :p And you've combined two of my biggest buttons--preppy and gymnast. Mmmmmm... ;p
Happy Endings
8/15/19, 1:26 PM
I'm a simple man. I see preppy, I upvote. Well done!
8/15/19, 11:41 AM
> well he had made a business our of it... > Actually, it IS pretty ingenious, as you'll see later, when you learn the Origin Story. Of course, the BULL didn't do it all on his own...
8/15/19, 11:15 AM
Love what you are doing with this series mate. Bookmark worthy stuff!
nerdysuitedbaby
8/15/19, 10:28 AM
Love it. Now Parker needs to get in a nice suit.Also be hot for them to get some alone time again in there house stop they're not affected to reflect on the changes.
8/15/19, 10:15 AM
Isn't this great? I think so, too -- I doubt there's anyone who can recreate my creepy sense of unease, suspense and erotic growth as well rubbrsome can. I know where the story's going and I'm still excited to read it! It is absolutely a wonderful splice of his world mixed with mine. A quick word on [POLLINATION: The Series](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/330) -- feel free to read it yourself -- it was a story that I completely made up as I went along. I almost never do that. Yes, I had a vague idea about overall plot -- I knew what I wanted the latter half of the book to be (not unlike Stephen King's THE STAND), but I had a LONG way to go before I got to that stuff. Interestingly, I'd just gotten to the brink of what I'd intended to do when I stopped writing it. It was turning into a major novel -- and I hadn't even STARTED the stuff I'd "plotted" -- when I lost the energy for it. But the exercise of following the vines as the Pollination took place really fascinated me, this guy led to this guy led to this guy, etc. and each branch kept blooming and growing in its own unique direction -- and I just let it. I have often considered jumping back in the garden and finishing the novel -- I'm considering it right now, as a matter of fact -- but I believe rubbrsome's take will satisfy us all for a while. This is good stuff, friends -- enjoy the ride! Thank you thank you thank you thank you for writing it!!!!!!
Rawshock
8/15/19, 8:12 AM
I'm loving this series! You do an excellent job of writing the old and new characters, the mental and reality changes, the power dynamics, and of course the sex scenes, it's a great twist compared to a lot of the stories here that they're actually deeply in love through the whole thing, and it's just similar enough to a certain would-be presidential gay couple in real life to be familiar and fun but still different enough to be original and fresh and not just a parody. So good that I honestly want to read it again but from Parker's perspective too. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 7:05 AM
update please. :(
8/15/19, 7:01 AM
Bibimbap, sorry it's taking so long. Been crazy busy. I have a new chapter in the works as we speak that will introduce two new characters. I have a lot planned for this story. :)
Bluedude
8/15/19, 5:43 AM
very hot! I hope ya do more.