Recent Comments

11/19/24, 4:34 PM
Interesting. I’m not sure if I’m a big fan of AI, but I really can’t fault the story it wrote with you.

11/19/24, 5:34 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thanks. That means a lot coming from you. "It wrote with you" is a good turn of phrase, and very apt, because the AI did most of the work, I just steered it in direction I wanted it to go. I think with AI you cant claim credit for the story, you can only claim credit for the idea, and, as long as it's just for fun, I dont see the harm.

11/19/24, 7:22 PM
@[Jamr](/user/show/10006831) Well, first of all thank you for that nice compliment. You do raise an interesting question. If you’re directing the horses in a certain direction, are the horses taking you there or are you taking them. I don’t think it could’ve written such a story if it didn’t have your direction. So, I will respectfully disagree and call you a collaborator. I’m sure quite a number of people will disagree with this point of view. My suggestion is we avoid falling into the trap of debating a theoretical question similar to the one in medieval times when they focused on, how many angels can dance on the head of a pin lol
11/19/24, 6:51 PM
would love more of this story
Anonymous
11/19/24, 3:03 PM
God these are so hot!! I've been checking every day for the next chapter and I'm so excited it's here. You've got the coolest ideas - bud following texted instructions without being able to consciously understand them; Trent being a "bright" jock; Ari being statueified. Can't wait to see what's next!

Anonymous
11/19/24, 6:43 PM
@Anonymous That's extremely kind of you, thanks! I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying them!
11/19/24, 5:27 PM
I love your work on CYOC and glad to see you publishing here now! Excited to see all the places you take us
Nov 18, 2024
Anonymous
11/19/24, 5:22 PM
This has so much potential. Series!!
11/19/24, 4:52 PM
An amazing read. I love the narrator aspect, and how the subjects are slightly aware of the strange situations, but then their mental/physical changes overcome them. I hope you continue this series.
Anonymous
11/19/24, 9:31 AM
Wow! This is AMAZING! You wouldn’t happen to have an social media, would you?

Brock
11/19/24, 4:46 PM
Really appreciate the solid feedback! And no, not doing the socials just yet... If I do I'll be sure to get the links up on my profile here. 🙂
11/19/24, 3:59 PM
I’d love to see more of Danny
11/19/24, 3:42 PM
It's great that your back and thanks for the hot new chapter. I hope you continue "I hate my master" too. 🙏
11/19/24, 3:01 PM
Please add more its so good

11/19/24, 3:07 PM
@[nfarious](/user/show/10005841) Thanks, but I think this story's reached its natural conclusion.