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Anonymous
8/15/19, 7:05 AM
update please. :(
8/15/19, 7:01 AM
Bibimbap, sorry it's taking so long. Been crazy busy. I have a new chapter in the works as we speak that will introduce two new characters. I have a lot planned for this story. :)
Bluedude
8/15/19, 5:43 AM
very hot! I hope ya do more.
8/15/19, 5:34 AM
It was the most impressive novel I read recently. Thank you so much. I'd like to see Steve and Kevin's story after this someday. I'm curious about Steve's life after Steve's father disappears... And I wonder what "death" looks like in this town. Maybe they will be bound to this town even after their deaths...?
Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:58 AM
Wow that's dark. Really pulling my feelings. I just want Declan to be happy...
8/15/19, 3:40 AM
I remember the bikers from the first story. Spreading their seed along the highways. Converting 'weekend bikers' to expand their gang. I hope we get to see them again!
Stephen
8/15/19, 3:37 AM
What a great story line. Vivid details. You are on a great beginning. Thank you.
8/15/19, 3:34 AM
nycboot You are exactly right. If you go back to Pollination (The Series), there are only two instances in that entire story where the symbiosis is described. And it's interesting that you mention the film Jaws. I think our imaginations are so good in filling in the missing details. Plus it keeps the audience hungry for more. So yes, my intention with the first chapter was to start off this series with a rocket blast. I want to show something fresh and yet familiar at the same time. I want the story to progress logically with the idea: how would the country respond after the first pollination. So expect the story to slow down a bit. I got to set up my dominoes now.
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:27 AM
Huge kudos to you!!
nycboot
8/15/19, 3:13 AM
Gads, my two favorite stories (Brain Feed and Pollination) as if combined. Rubbrsome, your writing has become better than any Hollywood movie. The detail, the suggestions, the atmosphere, the amazing pacing and how it speeds up or slows down - it's all more than fantastic. I don't know if you had intended it, but absman420's style was to release the most arousing detail at the beginning (like the movies Jaws or Psycho) and let the audience coast on that. Here, you get very close but you're apparently not going to reveal the flower-to-human connection until later - keeping us poor readers in suspense. :) Clearly as master writer!! Looking forward to more. :)