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8/15/19, 3:34 AM
nycboot You are exactly right. If you go back to Pollination (The Series), there are only two instances in that entire story where the symbiosis is described. And it's interesting that you mention the film Jaws. I think our imaginations are so good in filling in the missing details. Plus it keeps the audience hungry for more. So yes, my intention with the first chapter was to start off this series with a rocket blast. I want to show something fresh and yet familiar at the same time. I want the story to progress logically with the idea: how would the country respond after the first pollination. So expect the story to slow down a bit. I got to set up my dominoes now.
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:27 AM
Huge kudos to you!!
nycboot
8/15/19, 3:13 AM
Gads, my two favorite stories (Brain Feed and Pollination) as if combined. Rubbrsome, your writing has become better than any Hollywood movie. The detail, the suggestions, the atmosphere, the amazing pacing and how it speeds up or slows down - it's all more than fantastic. I don't know if you had intended it, but absman420's style was to release the most arousing detail at the beginning (like the movies Jaws or Psycho) and let the audience coast on that. Here, you get very close but you're apparently not going to reveal the flower-to-human connection until later - keeping us poor readers in suspense. :) Clearly as master writer!! Looking forward to more. :)
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:12 AM
lol well he had made a business our of it. THAT is one way to do it xd mane a herd!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:03 AM
I remember reading this when it was originally posted. I loved it then, and loved it now.
Anonymous
8/15/19, 2:55 AM
I'm intrigued. Keep going!!!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 2:30 AM
Excellent work
Boston Satyr
8/15/19, 2:13 AM
Very very pleased to see this universe of stories expanded. Pick up this thread and run with it; I know many of us are eager to read future chapters.
Anonymous
8/15/19, 2:05 AM
love it :)
Bibimbap
8/15/19, 1:39 AM
oh, yes, I agree with the previous comment! show us more of the town! maybe you could make a chapter with the guys walking across the town to see the changes. Personally, I'd love if anybody shows a minimum respect for the former respected officers, or if they make fun of them due their obvious stupidity.