Recent Comments

Martin
8/14/19, 7:49 PM
@Wesley: 👍 😘
8/14/19, 7:06 PM
Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
8/14/19, 6:53 PM
It's been pretty apparent that you're not very good at reading through things and thinking about them for a second before commenting on them anon, so maybe you could work on that in the future. That would mean more to me than a half-assed apology. The game comment wasn't a deflection--it's trying to point out that you're going to be disappointed by this story if you're looking at it from that frame of winners and losers because this is a tragedy by structure--a story where the good people lose because they aren't as good as they think they are. It's about the nature of failure, and how we survive it. I know that's a deeper reading than you're used to around here, and that you think anything beyond superficial porn shouldn't be on this site anyway because it might upset you, but stories can be more than that--and honestly? This is a story site--not a porn site. Says so right there in the name, and the mod seems to agree. If you don't understand it, might I suggest simply moving on and finding something else that interests you, instead of being so angry that I'm not catering to your expectations?
ForgottenCradle
8/14/19, 5:34 PM
I am in love with this series
ForgottenCradle
8/14/19, 4:58 PM
agreed. would have loved to see the chief ans the mayor's
nerdysuitedbaby
8/14/19, 4:58 PM
it's a sorry he relates to personally and it involves gay mind control so I think it fits regardless of taste. Not everything has to have a happy ending or soldering that can give you something to finish off. There was body modification with it it had ours mind control with a subject matter of gay Burt more as a gay horror story with a. ending you don't want. Also you made three comment from another marriage on Christine's kid. Does that mean it's possible it's Steve's son and Kevin's son finding there way together through them massive if you return.
Anonymous
8/14/19, 4:49 PM
For what it's worth, I posted the first angry comment only after reading the first paragraph of your intro, so I apologize for being rude about something traumatic that happened to you, that being said I really don't like this story and do not think it belongs here but I wish you the best personally, and you have every right to roll your eyes at this and blow it off.
ForgottenCradle
8/14/19, 4:35 PM
we need more cop stories these days
ForgottenCradle
8/14/19, 4:28 PM
oh,now THIS is really good
Anonymous
8/14/19, 4:23 PM
Also that "what do you mean "he wins"? This isnt a game" deflection was lame cuz you know damn well what people meant