Recent Comments

nycboot
8/14/19, 1:18 AM
I'm also one of those that was hoping Jason would show-up his father and show who's really the man of the house. :)
sweatnosis
8/14/19, 1:12 AM
Please continue!
8/14/19, 12:59 AM
i love steve
Apr 4, 2017
Rex
8/14/19, 12:55 AM
hot as fuck
Aug 13, 2019
nycboot
8/14/19, 12:36 AM
Wild start, but *amazingly* cruel without provocation. Perhaps Declan will get his just due.
Aug 13, 2019
lloyd311@aol.com
8/13/19, 10:49 PM
Super hot, Quark! You're the best...
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/13/19, 8:37 PM
continue please
Anonymous
8/13/19, 7:43 PM
Lol the first comment cracked me up
Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/13/19, 6:00 PM
strangely hot. hum.
8/13/19, 5:49 PM
The story's only 400 words long (which is amazing considering how many plot developments occur within it). On the basis of length, this probably should have been rejected, since the site policy says that story submissions need to be 1000 words or less. I think there is a way to get a great story out of this material, but it would probably need to be closer to 4000 words than 400.