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Aug 13, 2019
lloyd311@aol.com
8/13/19, 10:49 PM
Super hot, Quark! You're the best...
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/13/19, 8:37 PM
continue please
Anonymous
8/13/19, 7:43 PM
Lol the first comment cracked me up
Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/13/19, 6:00 PM
strangely hot. hum.
8/13/19, 5:49 PM
The story's only 400 words long (which is amazing considering how many plot developments occur within it). On the basis of length, this probably should have been rejected, since the site policy says that story submissions need to be 1000 words or less. I think there is a way to get a great story out of this material, but it would probably need to be closer to 4000 words than 400.
Martin
8/13/19, 4:28 PM
> I know this is going to sound douchey, but — just because someone posts a story doesn’t mean it should go up on the site. Editorial control should allow the editor to make a qualitative assessment and determination. I know that opens up another door for Martin to deal with, but, quality control demands it. This story sucked. It should never have been posted. It’s really that simple. Actually, I've struggled with this story. I wanted to give myself some time to decide and maybe even contact the author, but then someone of the staff approved the story. My mistake, because I should have left a notice to wait with the approval. Anyway, I'm conflicted. Contacting the author would mean a lot of work, discussions, explaining myself, probably hurt feelings... Not approving without any comment to the author is not only impolite, it also leaves the new aspiring author hanging in the air. Even if someone is inexperienced and struggling with his first story, it's still his baby, and of course you want to get a reaction - preferably a helpful one. And you never know, maybe there's a great author hidden behind those first, awkward, clumsy attempts - you might just have to give him some time and experience. But I'd love to know your opinion on this. How tight should we quality control the stories posted on GSS? [Please go to this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/quality-control-on-posted-stories/1001) to discuss this! I'd really appreciate your input!
Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/13/19, 3:38 PM
Looking forward to more of this one!
8/13/19, 3:21 PM
>wonderful character development! EXCELLENT metaphors > Wow! Thank you very much! Wait till you meet the rest of the Herd. The truth is, I had a whole lot of fun writing this story -- and actually learned a lot about cow breeds and animal husbandry and pack riding (more on that in later chapters) -- I go to some pretty weird places, but somehow it all just falls together and works. Plus, it plays on some of my favorite kinks. MILK MAN was the first story I wrote... and it shows. I wrote MILK MAN 2 about four or five years later, and upon revisiting this world, I knew a lot more about writing long-form and how to use the concepts -- and symbols and metaphors -- to their full advantage. Enjoy this crazy ride. This Big Ride...heeheehee > I’m envious! > Please... if you only knew how many orgasms I owed to you...
Anonymous
8/13/19, 3:03 PM
lets make him a slutty lapdancing stripper!
8/13/19, 2:33 PM
Are there more chapters planned for this? Rereading it, I notice the bracelet goes black. That could be a complete ending :(