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Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/13/19, 3:38 PM
Looking forward to more of this one!
8/13/19, 3:21 PM
>wonderful character development! EXCELLENT metaphors > Wow! Thank you very much! Wait till you meet the rest of the Herd. The truth is, I had a whole lot of fun writing this story -- and actually learned a lot about cow breeds and animal husbandry and pack riding (more on that in later chapters) -- I go to some pretty weird places, but somehow it all just falls together and works. Plus, it plays on some of my favorite kinks. MILK MAN was the first story I wrote... and it shows. I wrote MILK MAN 2 about four or five years later, and upon revisiting this world, I knew a lot more about writing long-form and how to use the concepts -- and symbols and metaphors -- to their full advantage. Enjoy this crazy ride. This Big Ride...heeheehee > I’m envious! > Please... if you only knew how many orgasms I owed to you...
Anonymous
8/13/19, 3:03 PM
lets make him a slutty lapdancing stripper!
8/13/19, 2:33 PM
Are there more chapters planned for this? Rereading it, I notice the bracelet goes black. That could be a complete ending :(
Stroppy Author
8/13/19, 2:32 PM
mate! wonderful character development! EXCELLENT metaphors. I'm envious!
8/13/19, 2:19 PM
> I very much love humiliation & dialog like that > I was working to set up both the BULL's arrogance/ homophobia/ dominance and counter-balance it with Guernsey's low self-esteem. It's a starting place. We won't see the BULL again for a while -- he becomes more a "presence" in the next few chapters -- so I had to establish him early.
Anonymous
8/13/19, 1:27 PM
I know this is going to sound douchey, but --- just because someone posts a story doesn't mean it should go up on the site. Editorial control should allow the editor to make a qualitative assessment and determination. I know that opens up another door for Martin to deal with, but, quality control demands it. This story sucked. It should never have been posted. It's really that simple.
Anonymous
8/13/19, 12:45 PM
this is the first story I'm ever commenting on because it's one of the best I've ever read. I can't wait to read more.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/13/19, 11:26 AM
Interesting twist, I very much love humiliation & dialog like that very much.
Anonymous
8/13/19, 10:46 AM
Please continue if possible, it is truly one of the best story I've read in a while.