Recent Comments

11/19/24, 10:56 AM
A wonderful start! A nice cast of characters, you continue to accel at characterisation. Intrigued to see where the story goes!
Anonymous
11/19/24, 10:43 AM
So pity this story does not have a end …. I don’t get it
11/19/24, 8:51 AM
Felt a bit short for what it was, but I did end up really liking it. Hoping we get more and maybe twin coaches, eheh.
11/19/24, 8:04 AM
Always loved this story since you posted it on CYOC, here's hoping we'll get more of it!
11/19/24, 5:07 AM
Interesting branched ending. Its hot and it still has Michaels heart. Now I'm looking forward for the compromise ending.
11/19/24, 4:12 AM
Love the story! Can't wait to see more
11/19/24, 2:25 AM
Great idea. I wish the middle part came first, as it seemed out of place there and maybe better suited as a story starter. That's a personal preference. Otherwise, it's a good story overall.
11/19/24, 2:07 AM
Wow, this is incredibly hot! I love the transformation descriptions!
11/13/24, 4:15 AM
Hope there’s more parts on the way

Brock
11/19/24, 1:45 AM
@[Sub1209](/user/show/10028107) As it turns out, yes! And thanks for reading!
11/12/24, 8:04 PM
This was amazingly hot and really took me by surprise... There has to be more to cum!

Brock
11/19/24, 1:45 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) More surprises to cum too. 😉