Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/11/19, 8:09 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes!!
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:55 PM
Don't be a dick, Heru. Just because it's not for you doesn't mean it's not for anyone. It's still transformation and hypnosis, and has a gay theme to it. Did you miss the sex scenes? Keep it up Wesley, can't wait for the last chapter.
Mac
8/11/19, 7:46 PM
great story keep it up writing
8/11/19, 7:42 PM
This is a gay fetish site and a story where being straight or the straight homophobic guy wins is utterly rediculus. That is why it gets the hate. This is also why it shouldn't be here. I will be quite glad for it to be finished and fade from the front page.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:30 PM
with all the negativity of this story, I get it. it draws the parallels of what was expected, who they were, what they deserved, and who they became. it's not the happiest story, but a truthful one, if you can see the metephors encapsulated in the writing. some of the most honest writing isn't always the most comfortable, and that is why I think this story gets so much hate.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:28 PM
i was hoping for the son to use 12 pack of water to turn his father not for him to recede back in to the closet . - good story but u satisfied with the ending.... unless theres a part two that makes it all better( HINT, HINT)
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:20 PM
I have to say, it felt like an interesting concept at first, more of a horror story than a sexy story, but right now? The Mayor has become a boring invincible villain and there seems no point to keep reading, as you just know he'll get his way. He's this town's Pennywise and he needs to be taken down. HARD.
8/11/19, 7:08 PM
Need moar! Need moar! :)
8/11/19, 7:08 PM
Too bad the father wasnt traimed too.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 5:55 PM
I kinda wish the statue stuff wouldve gone longer. And i liked it when the collector relinquished control during the statuefying phase