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LongtimeFan
8/11/19, 3:43 AM
Brrrr...chilling. Like everyone else, I genuinely despise the mayor. :p I'm also really impressed by your metaphor of the characters' lives being sucked out and literally building up the town--it's a perfect metaphor for how young queer people are expected to give and give and give in exchange for a "normal" life. Brilliant stuff! As a side note, though--and this isn't just about you, Wesley--does anyone else ever get tired of the unbeatable villains that show up in so many stories on this site? Edlam's Alex in the Reeducator series, King Rex over in absman's works, Hypnothrill's vaguely eldritch beings that inevitably corrupt every guy in sight, the new story about the guy with the enchanted signet ring, and--of course!--Mayor Derry. I confess that, unless there is more to the story (like in this tale!), I usually get really bored by the lack of conflict. The bad guy and his completely irresistible hypnotic/brainwashing power are going to win--why keep reading? :( But again, that is a personal preference. Just wondering if anyone else felt the same! Keep writing what YOU want, Wesley--it's amazing stuff.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 3:19 AM
It is too depressing that I want the mayor to be dead.
Tsquared
8/11/19, 3:00 AM
I feel the programming too. Please make a part 2.
nycboot
8/11/19, 2:44 AM
As you know I'm also a big fan of POLLINATION: THE SERIES (and the stand-alone story as well). There's something about your voice in those stories - like you don't totally identify with Mike Milano because he's too dumb or something, but nevertheless follow his moves. I love it. :) I like this story and wish it was longer. At one point you have a great threat in this one: > After a pollination, the plant is at its weakest and ready to be cut. If a cut isn’t made immediately after a pollination, the plant will become that much stronger, and ultimately, you’ll lose your battle with the creature that develops inside it. But if you retard the growth immediately, you’ll always remain in control. That's such a wonderful temptation to follow what would happen if the plant starts overpowering Puck. In a sense, the plant has overpowered everyone, even if they think they're in control. But it would be fun to get inside a guy who recognizes he's up against something he shouldn't have but wants anyway. Anyway, bravo for your wonderful stories!
8/11/19, 2:14 AM
Now would be a good time to go read the last metawriting entry of mine, if you haven't had a chance yet, because I promise you that the story is not going to get brighter: https://wesleybracken.com/2019/08/04/metawriting-straight-town-notes-4/
Anonymous
8/11/19, 2:01 AM
I fucking hate that mayor with a passion, he stands for all thats wrong with this damn country, the homophobia, the blatant unchristian hatred of people just being happy being who they are. i hope he chokes on buckshot as the sherriff blows his head open
8/11/19, 12:57 AM
This was sooo depressing; Like watching a train wreck. You did what you set out to do...
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/11/19, 12:01 AM
Isn't being fully transformed into whatever the Master wants every slave's dream?
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/10/19, 11:19 PM
Oh wow! Just to get that much cum down my throat and up my ass would be nirvana! Much less to be allowed to become a pup for a Master!
Anonymous
8/10/19, 11:12 PM
I'm dying to read the next chapter and know what Vic means with "call you when he needs you". thanks for keep Richard partially conscious of what's going on , is much better if he's aware from time to time of what a big Dick he's becoming! You haven't give us any clue of how Riverside's citizens see the cops with their new set of mind, but I hope every men is now disrespectful and lustful toward the police force! the humiliation seems promising!