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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/9/19, 4:31 PM
now lets see how the town is now with the changes
8/9/19, 3:26 PM
This is a fun story and idea. I like how they get a chance to acknowledge the changes and end up leaning into them instead of fighting them. It kind of gives the sense that maybe the focus group was really right about them all along. It'd be neat if they left the house, had another round of changes, came home, and then totally forgot about their lives from before the first change. Anyway, I'm looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 2:35 PM
I really like how and were this is
Bibimbap
8/9/19, 2:15 PM
Oh, fuck!!! great!!! Man, I love this story so much!!!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 2:03 PM
I liked your story but it felt like the mental change happened too quickly after the 2nd shower. Was hoping for more of a struggle but it was instant
Anonymous
8/9/19, 1:08 PM
I would love for Leo to somehow be able to turn the tables on Ty. Hot story so far, please continue!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 12:17 PM
I love stories like these that capture the eroticism of wanting (*longing*) to be more muscular and confident, then pay it off. It's strangely very motivating in my own journey.
malskin
8/9/19, 12:07 PM
am glad to read that the mayor has seen what is happening and fingers crossed Steve comes into line as a good and upstanding hetro citizen of Derryville and maybe the mayor can use him to catch Kevin. He can use Steve to put the chief into line as well. and Steve become more like his father in law in his wondering ways
8/9/19, 11:43 AM
>I wish my story had been more like this... The Jocking is a long overwrought mess that taught me so damn much about writing! > The best way to learn about writing is by writing! I just took Margaret Atwood's Master Class last week and she said one thing that I took with me: "The writer's best friend is the trash bin." Ain't that the truth? I look back at some of my older stuff and I shudder -- as a matter of fact, I'm going to start posting the MILK MAN saga next week, my first story. When I read it, I cringe at some of the choices. The fact is, I LOVE THE JOCKING. Yes, the plot's all over the place but the transformations are a whole lot of fun. I believe I hit all my favorite tropes in this story: the used jockstrap,the baseball cap, eating piles of meat, the growth machine. > In fact, I only included some sex because I figured people wouldn’t read it otherwise! > I can't tell you how many stories I've inserted obligatory sex scenes for the same reason.
Anonymous
8/9/19, 11:16 AM
id be more then happy to wear the collar