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nerdysuitedbaby
8/9/19, 12:15 AM
Still surprised that Kevin wasn't the one to break out. He had such a hatred and disdain for what would have been his life for a very long time and didn't think it was good just to play along. that was Steve and Steve's lived this life and not wanting to leave it behind. Now they're on separate paths.
8/8/19, 11:21 PM
Awesome story! really hot progression and steamy writing!
8/8/19, 11:11 PM
“What he proves,” GLAAD persists, “is that these days, a president can do absolutely anything he wants, in broad daylight, and get away with it.” This, well, this is interrsting and has some potential. Hehe
8/8/19, 11:09 PM
I like the reality changing focus group idea. In fact I cant help but imagine a dumb straight homophobic muscle man being turned into a smart, business savvy dominant gay man who can easily build harems. Hehe Besides that I'm not a super fan of the whole gay mayor needing to act straight to get elected.
GrowingGeek
8/8/19, 10:33 PM
This is one of my favourite stories, I can't help coming back to it. The mental and physical transformations are really well done, and it's really inventive. Great job Baralai!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/8/19, 8:29 PM
Where can I try out that collar?
8/8/19, 7:45 PM
Extremely interesting and well-written! If it wasn't on this website, I would've assumed this was the first chapter in a mainstream published gay romance novel. I'm excited to see where this goes!
8/8/19, 7:19 PM
> I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry > Why ISN'T there a sex scene between Jax and Jerry? That's a good question. I don't remember CallMeCrazy's characters having a lot of sex. I remember the transformation itself was often very sexual, but once they became football drones, they knew nothing but the game -- I would argue that they achieved their sexual expression through playing football, too. I haven't read that series in a good long time -- there were a lot of different branches and plot threads -- it's very complex. It would've been fun with Jax and Jerry, as identical twins, to get confused with who they're having sex with and ultimately lose their individual identity. Dog... wasn't this story long enough...?
8/8/19, 7:06 PM
Nice setup! Good characters, great POV, and the promise of some hotness to come. I’d love to read more. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:55 PM
This has always been one of my favourites. I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry, but over all the progression and development always makes me come back for more.