Recent Comments

8/8/19, 7:45 PM
Extremely interesting and well-written! If it wasn't on this website, I would've assumed this was the first chapter in a mainstream published gay romance novel. I'm excited to see where this goes!
8/8/19, 7:19 PM
> I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry > Why ISN'T there a sex scene between Jax and Jerry? That's a good question. I don't remember CallMeCrazy's characters having a lot of sex. I remember the transformation itself was often very sexual, but once they became football drones, they knew nothing but the game -- I would argue that they achieved their sexual expression through playing football, too. I haven't read that series in a good long time -- there were a lot of different branches and plot threads -- it's very complex. It would've been fun with Jax and Jerry, as identical twins, to get confused with who they're having sex with and ultimately lose their individual identity. Dog... wasn't this story long enough...?
8/8/19, 7:06 PM
Nice setup! Good characters, great POV, and the promise of some hotness to come. I’d love to read more. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:55 PM
This has always been one of my favourites. I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry, but over all the progression and development always makes me come back for more.
Dec 13, 2007
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:43 PM
I remember reading this story when it was on NCMC. I thought it was sadistic then, and I still do. You almost wish Jacob would do the same to David.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:35 PM
Love it--beautifully executed twink transformation!
8/8/19, 5:03 PM
This is not going to end well ☹ And damn it Kevin, you're better than this! You've done it before. You even helped Steve to be out. You can do it again!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 4:29 PM
bimbo tf on the horizon :eyes:
Bibimbap
8/8/19, 3:56 PM
Ohhhh!! man, I'm so hooked to this story!! i love it! Maybe is time to fix those "disgusting ugly uniforms"and change them for something very tight, showing those male hot bodies and big hard cocks. I'm imagining one of those sluty fetish cop uniforms, with micro pants-underwear and tall shiny boots. Put more emphasis on the dumbing down process, the submission and twist in Rick's mind is going splendidly!!
Jul 23, 2019
Tass
8/8/19, 3:24 PM
big fan of your stories. great transformation. hope you keep up the good work. would like to see a mohawk for a change. thx