Recent Comments

Dec 13, 2007
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:43 PM
I remember reading this story when it was on NCMC. I thought it was sadistic then, and I still do. You almost wish Jacob would do the same to David.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:35 PM
Love it--beautifully executed twink transformation!
8/8/19, 5:03 PM
This is not going to end well ☹ And damn it Kevin, you're better than this! You've done it before. You even helped Steve to be out. You can do it again!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 4:29 PM
bimbo tf on the horizon :eyes:
Bibimbap
8/8/19, 3:56 PM
Ohhhh!! man, I'm so hooked to this story!! i love it! Maybe is time to fix those "disgusting ugly uniforms"and change them for something very tight, showing those male hot bodies and big hard cocks. I'm imagining one of those sluty fetish cop uniforms, with micro pants-underwear and tall shiny boots. Put more emphasis on the dumbing down process, the submission and twist in Rick's mind is going splendidly!!
Jul 23, 2019
Tass
8/8/19, 3:24 PM
big fan of your stories. great transformation. hope you keep up the good work. would like to see a mohawk for a change. thx
Anonymous
8/8/19, 2:35 PM
Loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
8/8/19, 2:33 PM
Oh wow, this just gets hotter and hotter!
8/8/19, 2:26 PM
That was hot, and interesting way to tell the story (as a big text message to Raul).
8/8/19, 10:43 AM
Thank you! I largely aped the structure that Max Mann used -- although I added a secondary character, where he would usually focus on the familial relationship. I'm neither here nor there with incestual characters but since I was playing in Max Mann's playground, I followed his lead. (I can't imagine saying a line like "impregnate me like you did mom" -- even as I read it again after so many years, that line jumped out at me -- that's SOOOOOO Max Mann.) Glad you enjoyed it!