Recent Comments

8/8/19, 5:03 PM
This is not going to end well ☹ And damn it Kevin, you're better than this! You've done it before. You even helped Steve to be out. You can do it again!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 4:29 PM
bimbo tf on the horizon :eyes:
Bibimbap
8/8/19, 3:56 PM
Ohhhh!! man, I'm so hooked to this story!! i love it! Maybe is time to fix those "disgusting ugly uniforms"and change them for something very tight, showing those male hot bodies and big hard cocks. I'm imagining one of those sluty fetish cop uniforms, with micro pants-underwear and tall shiny boots. Put more emphasis on the dumbing down process, the submission and twist in Rick's mind is going splendidly!!
Jul 23, 2019
Tass
8/8/19, 3:24 PM
big fan of your stories. great transformation. hope you keep up the good work. would like to see a mohawk for a change. thx
Anonymous
8/8/19, 2:35 PM
Loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
8/8/19, 2:33 PM
Oh wow, this just gets hotter and hotter!
8/8/19, 2:26 PM
That was hot, and interesting way to tell the story (as a big text message to Raul).
8/8/19, 10:43 AM
Thank you! I largely aped the structure that Max Mann used -- although I added a secondary character, where he would usually focus on the familial relationship. I'm neither here nor there with incestual characters but since I was playing in Max Mann's playground, I followed his lead. (I can't imagine saying a line like "impregnate me like you did mom" -- even as I read it again after so many years, that line jumped out at me -- that's SOOOOOO Max Mann.) Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 8:12 AM
Hope this story continues. Would be nice to see a really slow evolution happening. Also perhaps cool to read how Leo's thoughts 'persuade' him to be more ballsy and what his thoughts and views are during the slow transformation. Pretty hot.
8/8/19, 6:43 AM
@Wesley Bracken - Yes! I'm so glad someone other than me hates that trope. it puts the blame of homophobia on gay men by presuming all homophobes are just self- hating. it's a way for straight people to ignore their own homophobia and the role society plays in maintaining it (and doesn't make any sense mathematically). Worse, it's frigging everywhere. That being says, tropes are just tools, and you use it really well here. it would probably go out on a second draft, but i could easily see the sheriff as bi, or straight but feeling like any close relationship with a guy is "gay" and going to "taint" him. There's definitely something to be said for how homophobia gets in the way of guys forming close friendships.