Recent Comments

8/7/19, 7:53 PM
Thanks! I ran into a bit of a hump in the second chapter, but I'm past it now, so hopefully not much longer. The ME/CFS likes to come along and kick my ass for weeks or months at a time, though, so I've learned not to make promises.
8/7/19, 7:24 PM
Wow. This has to be the most interesting story on this site. I don't find it especially hot personally but the themes and emotions you are playing with are so raw. I feel like not many of the stories here deal with the realities of being secretly gay in a very unaccepting world; probably because most of the people here have experienced some shade of that and it hurts. That's a reason that gay to straight stories are so reviled by a large portion of the community. As someone on the wish fulfillment side of the coin, I hope that your main characters find themselves and that love wins in the end.
Nottabe
8/7/19, 6:33 PM
ten autta ten
Nottabe
8/7/19, 6:23 PM
10/10
Nottabe
8/7/19, 5:33 PM
goals
Bibimbap
8/7/19, 4:15 PM
This story is one of the best I've ever read. I like a lot how you're developing the characters, every chapter is pure delight. I hope you surprise us with the villain, it's a great story and it deserves a great antagonist!
Anonymous
8/7/19, 4:08 PM
Clever and hot!!! Loved it!!
Bibimbap
8/7/19, 2:29 PM
This is going better and better. In one hand, I find the chapters too short because I want to read more and more, but in the other, I just love the slow changes, it make it even hotter. I hope you could expand the descriptions of the clothes, bodies and faces. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
8/7/19, 12:21 PM
This was fun. :-) It also inspired me to think somebody should write a story of statues with enormous erections, moving closer behind you whenever you're not looking at them...
Jul 29, 2012
8/7/19, 12:15 PM
Glad to see this pop into the highlighted archived stories. Another of my favorite Derek Williams tales, and a definite influence.