10/10 don't talk to me again

Yea I agree, please come back to this story!

Best writer on this site! Keep it up!

great series concept sb . hope we see a bit more . even though the collector eventually turns his captives into statues id love to see a deal with the mayor and the collector as to web wonder and his yet identified brother , like somehow they agree to willingly submit ti be eternal slaves to him and to keep peace in he city a tribute will be offered , just s thought

this is way more erotic than i expected it to be and i loved every second of it 10/10 cause ya gotta love that new car smell

Would like to see more about how Vic enslaves the minds of various people, that's a critical componet that is missing. Otherwise, this is a nice story.

yo im gonna let you finish but this is the best history of all time

i would like to see more from Nathan, hes hot as hell

Very nice. I'm liking the set up.

Magnificent! Sexily compelling and intriguing. You are a very talented writer with a very wickedly vivid imagination. I do hope you plan on continuing/finishing this heated tale of lust, passion and perhaps even romance and love. I read through the other comments. There's some nice ideas and wishes seen in them. I think the several that wanted Darren to pop Jack's cherries were interesting and hot, but I'm completely on board with your plot. You truly have a power bottom Darren directing his wanton needs with the hirsute straight stud daddy archetype Jack. But I'm left wondering, so far as the story has gone, if our muscled hunk daddy Jack isn't already gay or bi (deeply buried), because as staunch a alpha hetero man feels that Jack gives off, two distinct things stand out. First is Jack's stand on gay men, gay marriage, etc. He's been too adamant about how wrong it is, how disgusting gay men are, etc. Methinks that beefy daddy protests too much. Many times its been said that those who protest so vehemently against gays are hiding their own hidden desires. Perhaps that's why Jack's wife is divorcing him? Hmmm?!?! Couldn't really end up performing in bed, so to say? And Jack apparently going down to meet Sarah could have been another smoke screen? I realize Jack was going soft when massaging Darren, but there's so many twists and turns in the human psyche, so who truly knows. Secondly, straight daddy stud Jack bought and brought that really skintight red speedo. Not too many straight middle age dudes, muscled gods or not buy speedos, let alone plan on wearing them in public. Possibly in front of coworkers, underlings, etc. Hmmmm?!?! That seems so antithesis of the straight Jack we've read about. Plus, I do recall Jack sporting huge wood in that skintight red speedo, when Darren was straddling him during the impromptu massage poolside. Interesting. That was before Darren really began delving more and more into the gay type commands he gave Jack AFTER they left the pool. Interesting, indeed. So again, that beautiful yet volatile world of the human psyche. Hmmmm!?!? So in conclusion, I love speedo clad men, studly daddy types, athletes, bottom or tops, doms and subs, etc. Nothing hotter than muscled men in that ultra thin spandex/nylon/lycra racer brief. Wet or dry, the tighter the better, especially showing off big bulges and round butts. Yum. And you gave us the stunning, handsome Jack showing off all his glories in that skimpy red speedo, and Darren in his equally tasty black speedo. So please, give us sex, give us passion, give us more. Oh, that one readers comment about Jack and Darren ending up together? Yes! Excellent idea. Forever. Married. Love and romance triumph in the end. 😍😉👬👏👅❤