Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/7/19, 3:51 AM
Creative. I liked it!!
tomozco
8/7/19, 2:14 AM
Haha... that's pretty random. Thanks for your "highly constructive" comment, Ivan! I'd be happy to improve if you could point out on what you thought was poor in my story. If it was so bad and you still actually read it through to the end....well... thanks for wasting your time!
Dodger
8/7/19, 2:13 AM
Great story so far! Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Ivan
8/7/19, 1:01 AM
poorly written stories are not made better with notices that the writing is rough. why not get it edited at least once? waste of time story
nycboot
8/7/19, 12:07 AM
I thought it was going to be a "Lawnmower Man" story - but as the title stated, it turned out to be more "My Fair Lady." :) Very cute.
Chrisco
8/6/19, 7:30 PM
i love this story and cant wait for the next chapters. hope there will be no happy end for the hero !
Timet
8/6/19, 7:27 PM
I sure hope his first pup hood is in that package
Aug 5, 2019
firesix
8/6/19, 7:00 PM
I like writing crazy stories too, but - slow it down and pace it out! You've packed so much plot into this little bit of text that it's hard to grasp as I read. My advice is to spread it out and let some things speak for themselves! Nevertheless, I enjoyed this and hope for more.
8/6/19, 6:04 PM
Not bad.