Recent Comments

Aug 5, 2019
firesix
8/6/19, 7:00 PM
I like writing crazy stories too, but - slow it down and pace it out! You've packed so much plot into this little bit of text that it's hard to grasp as I read. My advice is to spread it out and let some things speak for themselves! Nevertheless, I enjoyed this and hope for more.
8/6/19, 6:04 PM
Not bad.
Anonymous
8/6/19, 5:08 PM
The story just gets better & better! I'm looking forward to reading about Joe's transformation!
Anonymous
8/6/19, 4:52 PM
Please, can you update this?? really hot!
M
8/6/19, 4:42 PM
Thank you once again PupHearted. I love the details of Joe's transformation. I'm curious to find out whats on the package and where the story goes from here. Keep those chapters coming Dude!
8/6/19, 2:16 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
8/6/19, 2:09 PM
Why do I think the next installment is going to include 'Eddie'?
Dec 31, 2018
Nottabe
8/6/19, 2:00 PM
10/10 don't talk to me again
Anonymous
8/6/19, 1:39 PM
Yea I agree, please come back to this story!
Anonymous
8/6/19, 1:29 PM
Best writer on this site! Keep it up!