Recent Comments

joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/5/19, 10:59 PM
I like how this is going
Slave Abdamelek
8/5/19, 9:58 PM
Thank you so much for your expert advice!
M
8/5/19, 9:42 PM
Awesome first chapter PupHearted. Like Joe, I was too hypnotized by Steve's actions and words. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Slave Abdamelek
8/5/19, 8:57 PM
Thank you all for the feedback, I really appreciate it. As I have said before, this story is very personal for me and the world has been in mi head for many years, and it is incredible to see others enjoy it too. I guess my life is basically okay but I suffer from anxiety and this helps me keep it at bay. I hope you'll like what is coming in the future. HAIL PHARAOH.
Anonymous
8/5/19, 6:54 PM
That was a creepy episode of Doctor Who, but at least we got Captain Jack from it. (If this want based on that episode, the it is a remarkable coincidence.)
sweatnosis
8/5/19, 6:24 PM
A little too rushed for me. Got me hard though! Given Ben Jr.'s inattention to detail, I have a feeling Ben Sr. may accidentally have a big surprise waiting for him next time he visits his bastard son (after all, I've read The Computer Collection!). ;)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.cm
8/5/19, 6:23 PM
It's been a while since I have been tranced to be a man's dog. Good times!
Anonymous
8/5/19, 3:17 PM
please please please do a follow
Anonymous
8/5/19, 3:02 PM
As if I didn't already love the mind control on both factions and the ability to revert changes like bringing snake soldiers back, the possession at the end cemented it. I hope you never stop this storyline, I always wanted something like this. Sidenote: hope everything else in ya life is good. We only see you as the writer part you show us but hope ya day and week and stuff go well. Haha
Stroppy Author
8/5/19, 2:52 PM
it's like a gay Fight club. love the imaginative twists and imagery. excellent and enviable piece.