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Anonymous
8/6/19, 1:39 AM
By Wagnerian I don't mean the fat lady and the horns, but rather the concepts of tying everything together, circular structure and leitmotifs. And certainly better than Donizetti or Auber which most stories on here are like. "Happy ending" lol...got there midway through the story many times heh. Like the Ring cycle, it begins and ends the same--in the Rhine. Now we need an Anna Russell summary of your cycle and it'll be complete. :)
8/6/19, 12:18 AM
What a great transformation of the sheriff. One of the best I've ever read. Stayed hard throughout. "....amazed that such an important lawman could have such tiny testicles..." I had a good chuckle on that one. Every cop I've had sex with or have seen in a locker room has tiny dicks and balls. Maybe they compensate by being cops. Who knows? But that line was humorous and well placed.
M
8/5/19, 11:17 PM
Fantastic Chapter Dude. I'm hard as a rock reading it. I love how Steve tames Joe, making him submit thru his pheromones, hypnosis and domination. Every pup needs a Trainer like Steve. I know I do. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
SpeedoLuver
8/5/19, 11:15 PM
Really enjoyed the series. It's too bad you never completed it, but alas life happens; writers block, boredom, ran out of steam, etc. So many times I wanted Tyler to finally get fucked up his hot cunt. From Master's huge cock, to his own daddy's big dick, then the studly coach's juicy large cut cock, Tyler truly needed to be plowed and truly bitched.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/5/19, 10:59 PM
I like how this is going
Slave Abdamelek
8/5/19, 9:58 PM
Thank you so much for your expert advice!
M
8/5/19, 9:42 PM
Awesome first chapter PupHearted. Like Joe, I was too hypnotized by Steve's actions and words. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Slave Abdamelek
8/5/19, 8:57 PM
Thank you all for the feedback, I really appreciate it. As I have said before, this story is very personal for me and the world has been in mi head for many years, and it is incredible to see others enjoy it too. I guess my life is basically okay but I suffer from anxiety and this helps me keep it at bay. I hope you'll like what is coming in the future. HAIL PHARAOH.
Anonymous
8/5/19, 6:54 PM
That was a creepy episode of Doctor Who, but at least we got Captain Jack from it. (If this want based on that episode, the it is a remarkable coincidence.)
sweatnosis
8/5/19, 6:24 PM
A little too rushed for me. Got me hard though! Given Ben Jr.'s inattention to detail, I have a feeling Ben Sr. may accidentally have a big surprise waiting for him next time he visits his bastard son (after all, I've read The Computer Collection!). ;)