Recent Comments

Ivan
8/7/19, 1:01 AM
poorly written stories are not made better with notices that the writing is rough. why not get it edited at least once? waste of time story
nycboot
8/7/19, 12:07 AM
I thought it was going to be a "Lawnmower Man" story - but as the title stated, it turned out to be more "My Fair Lady." :) Very cute.
Chrisco
8/6/19, 7:30 PM
i love this story and cant wait for the next chapters. hope there will be no happy end for the hero !
Timet
8/6/19, 7:27 PM
I sure hope his first pup hood is in that package
Aug 5, 2019
firesix
8/6/19, 7:00 PM
I like writing crazy stories too, but - slow it down and pace it out! You've packed so much plot into this little bit of text that it's hard to grasp as I read. My advice is to spread it out and let some things speak for themselves! Nevertheless, I enjoyed this and hope for more.
8/6/19, 6:04 PM
Not bad.
Anonymous
8/6/19, 5:08 PM
The story just gets better & better! I'm looking forward to reading about Joe's transformation!
Anonymous
8/6/19, 4:52 PM
Please, can you update this?? really hot!
M
8/6/19, 4:42 PM
Thank you once again PupHearted. I love the details of Joe's transformation. I'm curious to find out whats on the package and where the story goes from here. Keep those chapters coming Dude!
8/6/19, 2:16 PM
Please continue!