Very intriguing idea! I'm looking forward to read where this is heading to and what kind of fun Andy's gonna have with his new toy which used to be his son!

Hey guys Sorry I haven't posted in a while. I hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed writing it, its based off of one of my favourite episodes of doctor who 'the empty child'. This will probably be a two to three part horror, and don't worry jockfun is next. Hope you enjoy Rozza

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Wow, thank you, everybody! It's very satisfying to read these comments. I've been working on this story -- all told -- about a year. The day the source material arrived from Amazon popped up in my FB memory-feed the other day, proving it. I started writing on 10Nov18 and just finished it in July19. 110 pages. 41,896 words. I think APOLLYON is still longer, but I haven't tackled something this big in a good while. In fact, the initial idea was to pull Rex out of the timestream, let him play with the LEGION and drop him back at the exact same spot at the end. At first, I thought of it more as a comic book Annual than a multi-part story, but once I realized that the reading audience didn't know these characters, I decided to open it up, slow it down and play. You can see where that happens in the story. I'm morphing three or four characters a chapter, then I'm like... "Whoa, there pony! Slow down..." In fact, plot-wise, the middle of the story was the most difficult for me. I knew where I wanted all the characters to end up -- because I so clearly knew the ending -- but wasn't exactly sure how I was gonna get there. Especially w Smartiak 6. Originally, Smartiak was going to "convert" all the non-human characters "for" Rex: ie: Chameleon Boy, Wildfire -- but then I found a way more interesting use for Smarty. (And honestly, I didn't even want to deal with Wildfire.) And it also allowed me to satirize some stuff in LEGION that I've always hated -- the lesbian shrinking violet and lightning lass -- the horrible Furball period that Timber Wolf went through -- Cosmic Boy's scandalous corset -- Brainiac 5's descent to madness. Secondly, I love time-travel stories! The idea of Superion changing the timeline to make Rex a hero rather than a villain is so... Superion, isn't it? I relished establishing a timeline only to wreck it and reconstruct it. Breaking down the heterosexual Horde and recreating them as same-sex hypermasculine heroes was... well, that was more me than Superion, but I wouldn't mind waking up in that reality, either. Thank you for taking the journey with me. I have a couple one-shots in my head that I want to get out next, then, who knows?

Thank you ABSMAN for this amazing story. I loved how you brought both parts together in the end, making them end is the same way. It was a stroke of genius! I can't wait to see what story you come up with next. Keep on writing Dude!

Too bad you didn't take this further. First, Billy needed and wanted to suck and get fucked by his real daddy's huge cock. Especially when the dude was in his suit, huge cock tenting his trousers out like a compass pointing true north to his son's hot mouth and boi-pussy. And more hot, Bryant needed to be drugged and trained to take BBC's. As in Big Black Cocks rammed up his speedo-clad cunt, and shoved down his throat. That South African white boi needed to be bitched forever to BBC. It's meant be, his proper place. could you imagine his boss making huge money selling his mouth and ass at the gym to Black members. Lots of black studs would line up to pay to pound that pretty white lifeguards pussy as he wore a skintight speedo. Imagine the loads of cum Bryant would shot into his sinfully sexy speedos as black men bitched him and addicted him to BBC'S! 😃😛👅👅👅👅👅 .

What a wonderful ending! I admit I'm a sucker for the "love redeems" story arc. :) It's especially nice because King Rex WAS largely a one-note villain in the beginning who got off (literally and figuratively) on having people worship him. But getting the chance to "do it over" allowed him to discover genuine love, which was the secret to keeping him from becoming a monster. It's surprisingly poignant...even in the "real world," how many people, if they had been shown love and decency and not been exposed to (and eventually swayed by) ideas about accumulating power and wealth, might use their gifts to help others? It makes you wonder...fantastic work, absman. :)

Ha! That's exactly how I was taught to suck cock properly -- using a dildo while watching porn, doing what I saw on the screen!

Ushishishishi. Interesting stuff and sad part is the end. But it did give the villian a satisfying end and redemption. Also since you're doing the marvel parody. Could you use the symbiote as a mind control medium to the male superhero. Enslaving the male superhero while making them powerful. Loyal and obidient slaves.

Please continue this