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8/3/19, 12:08 PM
You left out one of my favorites: "Pollination: The Series." A lot of the action there takes place in Garden City, Kansas.
8/3/19, 11:54 AM
On reflection, I've realized Kansas appears in a lot of my stories. Here and THE NEW SUPERMEN as well as SUPERION'S home state in KING REX 2. What an odd affinity for a state I've only been to less than a handful of times.
8/3/19, 10:51 AM
> God, these Kansas chapters are just incredible–among the best things you’ve ever written in my opinion. > Thank you!!! High praise, indeed -- and that coming from a guy with 420 in his name! There were moments when writing this series that I felt I was really channeling FanTCdude. I think that these two "Kansas" chapters are really the best amalgamation of his style and mine -- he with the unapologetic masculine transformation and me with the sinister overtones to every goddamn thing. I really do think I capture his style here and that elevated my own writing. Thank you again, Hypnothrill -- this means a lot coming from you! (I'm thinking of doing a "Playing with..." using some of your stuff....) > I couldn’t agree more; it feels like the San Francisco chapters were just the setup for the real story > I've talked before about how much I love exposition. Ten chapters as a set-up is about right for me. Hahaha Here's an interesting fact: originally, the Kansas stuff was gonna be one chapter and an epilogue, but the epilogue kept getting longer and longer until I eventually broke it off and created two full chapters. These two chapters remain the most popular parts of the story. And I agree with you -- it would be easy to break and create a whole different series ("Kansas!") right here, which would probably be better than the "San Fran" stuff.
Anonymous
8/3/19, 7:54 AM
i love genie stories soooo much...might i suggest the genie making some subs? or some people in chastity
8/3/19, 7:07 AM
I couldn't agree more; it feels like the San Francisco chapters were just the setup for the real story. Fantastic!!
Jul 28, 2019
SubforTay
8/3/19, 5:20 AM
I hope you will revisit the "Extra" salon. Maybe some of these firemen could visit there?
Anonymous
8/3/19, 5:10 AM
Love this sort of premise soooooo much. Thanks as always!
Anonymous
8/3/19, 4:53 AM
Genies, man. More trouble than they're worth ;)
TurnMeIntoABearToo
8/3/19, 4:35 AM
Yessss! Need more, can't wait >:)
Lusty Stallion
8/3/19, 4:24 AM
Well done man. Great first story. Tons of great ideas. I find I like to write as fast as my imagination, but building some suspense, and staying in particular scenes a bit longer helps build the fantasy. Keep it up man, I love where you're taking it