Recent Comments

TurnMeIntoABearToo
8/3/19, 4:35 AM
Yessss! Need more, can't wait >:)
Lusty Stallion
8/3/19, 4:24 AM
Well done man. Great first story. Tons of great ideas. I find I like to write as fast as my imagination, but building some suspense, and staying in particular scenes a bit longer helps build the fantasy. Keep it up man, I love where you're taking it
Aug 1, 2019
Swizzington
8/3/19, 3:28 AM
Bigger, are you saying you have actually met people in real life with the name Chernobyl?
Anonymous
8/3/19, 2:48 AM
Love the moustache focus! Keep writing!
Anonymous
8/3/19, 1:57 AM
bleach yuk ugh
Cigarboy Cody
8/3/19, 1:43 AM
I concur. Some of your best stuff yet!! Benny is going to be like a character from Invasion of the Body Snatchers. As he watches his friends change one by one. Until he doesn't know eho to trust. Maybe even his son will become a LittleMsn
Anonymous
8/3/19, 1:08 AM
Slow moving but very well put together. Love the role reversal, but I think you can do much more with your setup. Looking forward to you building on this.
sweatnosis
8/2/19, 11:11 PM
Still hoping there's more of this to come!
8/2/19, 10:52 PM
God, these Kansas chapters are just incredible--among the best things you've ever written in my opinion. I think it's brilliant how you set up Benny as the antagonist, trying to police his space so it doesn't get too "faggy" or "San Francisco," And it puts us in a really interesting position of rooting for the Budds to "cure" to community of its homophobia even when they're acting like stereotypical drug pushers, with a sales patter that's actually quite sinister. And of course, the scene at the end of this chapter showing the Sheriff's rapid mental transformation is just amazingly hot!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/2/19, 9:41 PM
A team i want to be on!