Recent Comments

8/2/19, 6:40 PM
Well done!! I suspect that there's more to Mark's transformation than meets the eye
Jul 2, 2008
Nhj
8/2/19, 5:56 PM
Yes, a studly and arrogant U.S. Marine turned into a faggot queer bottom bitch whore slut for 'Chink' cocks? Great idea and story. I imagine that the now turned Marine is loving his enslavement to superior Chinese dicks. I bet his master has him in all sorts of clothing options to spice things up. Uniforms, jockstraps, speedos, bikini briefs, panties, etc. Nothing better than a once stuck up alpha male getting knocked down to submissive cunt status... and loving it.
Anonymous
8/2/19, 5:45 PM
its your story so do what you like. But i would love to see a guy turned into a sexy redhead hipster bear covered in hair and tattoos.
Anonymous
8/2/19, 5:23 PM
fuck ya this is a great story so far. i love that we are getting both Jakes old memoirs, and the new ones created thanks to the new choices hes making. cant wait to see the final two choices he makes.
Aug 1, 2019
Anonymous
8/2/19, 4:37 PM
i rate the character names 3.6 not great, not terrible
Anonymous
8/2/19, 4:36 PM
I like where this is going. can't wait for the next chapter.
8/2/19, 3:03 PM
Really enjoyed the story. Definitely hoping for more from the doctor or a follow up for our new tuxedo servant.
Anonymous
8/2/19, 1:05 PM
no problem
8/2/19, 12:59 PM
This is the second victim. I made a correction in the title but it hasn't been published. In the meantime, apologies for the mistake!
Anonymous
8/2/19, 12:23 PM
why is this the third victim? where is the second?