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Aug 1, 2019
8/2/19, 1:58 AM
Loved the story! Very gradual changes building to some hot scenes! Maybe he was named Chernobyl because he was born in 1986? The same year as the disaster.
8/2/19, 1:46 AM
I really hope a fusion of both would walk out of that machine.
Bimarguy
8/2/19, 1:30 AM
thanks Nicky for keeping this story going , as always good work
Anonymous
8/2/19, 1:04 AM
Great start to a hot transformation!
FantasyWithKinks
8/2/19, 12:47 AM
Oh man, I loved your Tumblr stories! The wishing service concept you were exploring there, as well as this idea, are some of my favourite there are in the world. I find it so unbelievably hot, and you do a great job with it. One thing I will suggest is to take the time to really describe the before and after. Looking back at DW's original stories (and I swear there's another plus three story that I read once but I can never find it...) the fantastic thing is how many minute details there are to the ways that people transform. That is what really elevates folks like Derek Williams to being absolute classic reads I return to regularly.
8/2/19, 12:33 AM
@blindseer0 - That's a pretty apt summary of it all for sure--thanks for reading it with such depth and attention to detail!
8/1/19, 11:57 PM
Yes I wrote the basics of this story many years ago in CYOC and decided to re-write it and publish it here for your enjoyment. I have 2 more chapters to work on and then it will all be new transformations. Taking into consideration the preferences of my readers and my own dark fetishes...
Anonymous
8/1/19, 9:57 PM
Love that one of my favorite stories of cyoc.net is getting a second life here <3
Anonymous
8/1/19, 9:31 PM
hoooot. please continue this!
Jul 28, 2019
Declan
8/1/19, 9:16 PM
Cool, but who are the patrons? Men? Women? I would have loved a first hand account of Jay's first time sucking cock and getting his ass plowed.