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Aug 1, 2019
Newcub45
8/1/19, 5:35 AM
awesome story!
Aug 1, 2019
firesix
8/1/19, 4:46 AM
Lmao what kind of name is Chernobyl
Anonymous
8/1/19, 4:35 AM
pretty good would have liked the sex scenes to devlope a little more
8/1/19, 4:29 AM
ugh. broke 3 rule. like a lot in the first six wishes. To be fair I realize it is an unfair Advantage it's just bothersome because even when Derrick Williams was using the device he really really cheated such as using phrases at the end of sentences to completely change the worth of meaning of the entire wish. I guess the thing is I like the Transformations I like the idea of the characters but the overall premise is something of a puzzle but if you can literally break the rules of the puzzle or if it turns out to be so free you're basically dealing with an arbitrary God monster you kind of have to wonder what am I supposed to feel. The end of the first part where the genie was pissed off with the guy who had me to completed out her a****** being an a****** to someone who was gay and sober cited to punish him as a result of the monster he made me overall not like the work
8/1/19, 3:40 AM
LOL....a banana. Fitting for a straight boy until he learns how to take cock like a real man. I look forward to where you take this.
003
8/1/19, 3:09 AM
Love anyone following up on a Derek Williams story :) Hot plot too! Look forward to your future stuff! One thing you might want to consider next time, most of this genie's additions were kinda redundant. Or at least in the same spirit as the original wish, instead of being all playfully subversive. Not complaining really - it just means Matt already had a dirty mind and didn't need much extra 'help' haha
Anonymous
8/1/19, 3:07 AM
Would love to see a Sikh, or even an Arab from the list you made in chapter 4. That would be super hot, and they're rare TFs
8/1/19, 2:48 AM
Great series.... love the descriptive transformations too.
8/1/19, 2:17 AM
Fantastic idea and great writting......part 2? PLEASE
8/1/19, 2:14 AM
Wonderful story! How about a huge muscle bear?