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Anonymous
7/31/19, 7:11 PM
Amazing writing - you really conveyed the growing emotion between the two characters, followed by the revelation of attraction and then, the sex--
Mdlftr
7/31/19, 6:48 PM
Terrific developments here, both in the story and in our narrator LOL! Are the mysterious barrista and Cam in on something to influence our narrator? Time will tell....
7/31/19, 6:43 PM
I'm an avid cyclist -- not only a bike commuter, but I race as well. (You should see me in bibs!) In the early 2000's I started moutain-biking -- I happened to live next to one of the best single-track courses on the east coast. I LOVE mountain-biking! It's fun in a completely different way than any other type of ride. At that time, I was a teacher, so was able to go everyday during the summer months. My best friend -- straight guy -- biked with me. and this story grew out of the MANY times I would offer to suck his dick in the middle of the woods (often after we'd smoke a joint). Finally one day, maybe tired of me asking, maybe extremely horny, he acquiesced. That began a summer-long tradition. And damn, he had a nice dick.
Mdlftr
7/31/19, 5:52 PM
This is enticingly ominous -- what will happen to the narrator? It doesn't look good, whatever happens! Lots of ominous foreshadowing......
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:50 PM
I would love to write a sequel to this story, where Josh somehow gets even with his uncle.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:46 PM
Very well written. I love that you keep up the descriptions of the hypnotic words in this second installment. The reader can sense the growing excitement, as we look forward to Xavier's increasing muscle development, as well as the the anticipation of seeing where the hypnotist is intending to take this client.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:42 PM
I remember reading this story when I first found the NCMC. I thought it was hot then. On the re-read, it was even hotter. Love your stories!!!
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:25 PM
Amazing work there. Can't wait for part two.
Mdlftr
7/31/19, 5:12 PM
Entertaining and well written! I especially liked how the professor asked Bradley (of his dim-witted girlfriend) "Does it suck your cock?" and Bradley's answer, "Yes, we practice every day!" The sexist attitudes of the men towards women are well captured, albeit ironically, since Bradley has become a sex machine himself. Hopefully he won't become an idiot. On another note, if you want to poke fun at historical stories about sex, you might have a real horror show if you re-told Abelard and Heloise - THAT has humiliation, mutilation, shame and unrequited love - perhaps a bit too heavy for GSS!
Rookie BoyCop
7/31/19, 5:11 PM
Please...please continue this!