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Rookie BoyCop
7/31/19, 5:11 PM
Please...please continue this!
7/31/19, 5:03 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby Glad I've piqued your interest! @greg.michaelson.7@gmail.com Thanks, I thought the hint of more to come would be a nice way to end things! @Beardfull1 Glad you found it to the point and enjoyed the barber scene!
7/31/19, 3:42 PM
Awesome story. Like other people said, the loss of mind is hot but wish it was more gradual with some resistance to it.
Jul 28, 2019
Anonymous
7/31/19, 3:27 PM
Talk about first responders! Gives a whole new perspective to the idea of heroic firemen. Well written!
Jan 23, 2019
M
7/31/19, 2:26 PM
please refer to a story on EMCSA titled: Takedown: Agent Leidner by the slaver. the induction is too similar and they posted in June, where you did in January. i think you are the victim of the "most flattering" (not) crime against artists. plagiarism. this work was too good to allow someone to just steal it. and believe me. holy crap is this story amazingly arousing.
Beardfull1
7/31/19, 2:04 PM
Great start! Love a good concise story... right to the point. I'm specially fond of barber transformation stories... even more so when they involve facial hair growth. So please continue and have him grow a big bushy moustache to go with his new mbp. Then keep transforming young men into elderly bears with big or bushy facial hair... if you make them hairy all over it woud be a big plus! Thanks again for your writing
7/31/19, 2:00 PM
Not sure why it lost the paragraph breaks, but I've edited to restore them.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 12:56 PM
Needs to be broken up into proper paragraphs. It's unreadable otherwise
Anonymous
7/31/19, 11:30 AM
Another amazing chapter. Well done.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 11:12 AM
you almost feel bad for the little hero! can't wait to see what happens to him next... his fate is sealed!