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Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:50 PM
I would love to write a sequel to this story, where Josh somehow gets even with his uncle.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:46 PM
Very well written. I love that you keep up the descriptions of the hypnotic words in this second installment. The reader can sense the growing excitement, as we look forward to Xavier's increasing muscle development, as well as the the anticipation of seeing where the hypnotist is intending to take this client.
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:42 PM
I remember reading this story when I first found the NCMC. I thought it was hot then. On the re-read, it was even hotter. Love your stories!!!
Anonymous
7/31/19, 5:25 PM
Amazing work there. Can't wait for part two.
Mdlftr
7/31/19, 5:12 PM
Entertaining and well written! I especially liked how the professor asked Bradley (of his dim-witted girlfriend) "Does it suck your cock?" and Bradley's answer, "Yes, we practice every day!" The sexist attitudes of the men towards women are well captured, albeit ironically, since Bradley has become a sex machine himself. Hopefully he won't become an idiot. On another note, if you want to poke fun at historical stories about sex, you might have a real horror show if you re-told Abelard and Heloise - THAT has humiliation, mutilation, shame and unrequited love - perhaps a bit too heavy for GSS!
Rookie BoyCop
7/31/19, 5:11 PM
Please...please continue this!
7/31/19, 5:03 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby Glad I've piqued your interest! @greg.michaelson.7@gmail.com Thanks, I thought the hint of more to come would be a nice way to end things! @Beardfull1 Glad you found it to the point and enjoyed the barber scene!
7/31/19, 3:42 PM
Awesome story. Like other people said, the loss of mind is hot but wish it was more gradual with some resistance to it.
Jul 28, 2019
Anonymous
7/31/19, 3:27 PM
Talk about first responders! Gives a whole new perspective to the idea of heroic firemen. Well written!
Jan 23, 2019
M
7/31/19, 2:26 PM
please refer to a story on EMCSA titled: Takedown: Agent Leidner by the slaver. the induction is too similar and they posted in June, where you did in January. i think you are the victim of the "most flattering" (not) crime against artists. plagiarism. this work was too good to allow someone to just steal it. and believe me. holy crap is this story amazingly arousing.