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Lytcom
7/29/19, 2:53 PM
Great story. Wonder how Corey will get Matt back on the apps. If he will not use the app himself, perhaps Corey can take a picture of him on his phone and send a link disguised as important workstuff. The aspect of the main character changing others is always hot.
Mutabear
7/29/19, 2:40 PM
Damn man. You outdo yourself every time!
Mar 13, 2018
Anonymous
7/29/19, 2:36 PM
This story is legend! Im so surprised this didnt get a sequel
Anonymous
7/29/19, 2:34 PM
Agreed!!
Jul 28, 2019
Anonymous
7/29/19, 2:33 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Willie Cici
7/29/19, 2:33 PM
It's the spiraling oblivious downward descent that makes it hot!! Keep it going.
Anonymous
7/29/19, 11:47 AM
Damn, it's not like i can wank to this because it fills with confusion and emotions. And that isn't really sexy - I think I'd need more 'silliness' to a story for it to be actually a wanking material, even though i am into gay-to-straight theme Maybe when they leave this town together, still being all no-homo etc., being all rough and manly, then yeah, I guess it'll get me hard
7/29/19, 11:38 AM
> …the future villain that will be smarty? > I thought about that -- revealing the Time Stalker to be the spurned Smartiak 6. In LEGION comics, the reveal has happened several times -- and always with a different identity for the Time Trapper. Brainiac 5 has said, "I'd theorize that's all the Time Trapper has ever been: a **sentient alternative timeline** rebelling against ours. His own history changes, I guess even his identity could alter, as the true timeline marches on." (from LEGION OF 3 WORLDS, by Geoff Johns) Ultimately, I decided to leave it alone entirely. As you will see, the Time Stalker's identity ultimately doesn't matter.... > it was a sad touch that they really were always in the same university, how cruel… > Yeah.... I'm a bitch for irony. Hahaha.... if only Teen Superion had gone to some college football games, they might have avoided all this.
LongtimeFan
7/29/19, 11:12 AM
Achingly hot! Love the slow mental changes--no does that simmer like you, Hypnothrill. Imagine your mind getting emptier and emptier the more you used the app...brilliant! :)
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
7/29/19, 10:04 AM
I wonder if Matt will get hooked too