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Anonymous
7/29/19, 2:34 PM
Agreed!!
Jul 28, 2019
Anonymous
7/29/19, 2:33 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Willie Cici
7/29/19, 2:33 PM
It's the spiraling oblivious downward descent that makes it hot!! Keep it going.
Anonymous
7/29/19, 11:47 AM
Damn, it's not like i can wank to this because it fills with confusion and emotions. And that isn't really sexy - I think I'd need more 'silliness' to a story for it to be actually a wanking material, even though i am into gay-to-straight theme Maybe when they leave this town together, still being all no-homo etc., being all rough and manly, then yeah, I guess it'll get me hard
7/29/19, 11:38 AM
> …the future villain that will be smarty? > I thought about that -- revealing the Time Stalker to be the spurned Smartiak 6. In LEGION comics, the reveal has happened several times -- and always with a different identity for the Time Trapper. Brainiac 5 has said, "I'd theorize that's all the Time Trapper has ever been: a **sentient alternative timeline** rebelling against ours. His own history changes, I guess even his identity could alter, as the true timeline marches on." (from LEGION OF 3 WORLDS, by Geoff Johns) Ultimately, I decided to leave it alone entirely. As you will see, the Time Stalker's identity ultimately doesn't matter.... > it was a sad touch that they really were always in the same university, how cruel… > Yeah.... I'm a bitch for irony. Hahaha.... if only Teen Superion had gone to some college football games, they might have avoided all this.
LongtimeFan
7/29/19, 11:12 AM
Achingly hot! Love the slow mental changes--no does that simmer like you, Hypnothrill. Imagine your mind getting emptier and emptier the more you used the app...brilliant! :)
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
7/29/19, 10:04 AM
I wonder if Matt will get hooked too
Anonymous
7/29/19, 9:53 AM
just can't wait to see Bruce works for Coach to transform Dave : )
Anonymous
7/29/19, 9:37 AM
I'm liking how this is developing :)
Felix
7/29/19, 8:17 AM
really don't know how to start this comment so I'll be more or less brief -Speaking of smarty, well, in a way I feel bad but in a certain way not, it's like the price of humanity, it's true that he thought about it but never wanted it, quite ironic, despite having a higher intellegency, he could not control his new emotions and as a result a crazy love and a great hatred towards the corresponding person, in this case Superion... -with respect about Rex and reading the comments, yeah karma is a bitch..., I imagine that Rex will have to tell him everything about his past to Superion or that the time stalker will give clue to Superion or tell him the truth, in any case I don't think he like the news that it was against his will. And to conclude, I love it this story and the way you carry out the relationships, how they adapted, changed or just broken, the progress of rex and...the future villain that will be smarty? in the same time it was a sad touch that they really were always in the same university, how cruel...