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tiny tim
7/28/19, 8:26 PM
liked part 5 the best so far..the stuff at work. Even though the 'slave' is generally aware of what's going I really enjoyed the subliminal stuff, like when he sits on the toilet & calls his co worker 'sir' without thinking... I hope his unconscious behavior continues to develop at work, until it's just 'second-nature' to him !
Apr 22, 2019
jddrapeau@yahoo.ca
7/28/19, 8:01 PM
I love it when the father emerges from the room, and the precise description of his face, overwhelmed by this sexual energy, so powerful and worrying at the same time, for the reader, but nevertheless intoxicating,because of its depravity!! Oh!.. Let's all get us infected gentlemen !! THANK YOU! GREAT STORY!!
7/28/19, 7:43 PM
> I’ll just be in the corner crying for my bio-mechanic son 😢 > Finally! I thought I'd go my whole life and never meet a Brainiac 5 fan! I'm glad to know you exist. I kid. Honestly, I've always been sort-of lukewarm to Brainy. I recognize his importance as a character -- every team needs a genius -- but I've never been, like, "Oh, boy! This story features Brainiac 5!" (Like I do when it's Star Boy...) Then, when I was an impressionable youth, there was that horrible, horrible story-arc by Jim Starlin where Brainy goes full-out insane and unleashes Omega on the LEGION. (After setting-up Ultra Boy -- another favorite -- for murder!) So you can see in my mind how Brainiac is synonymous with insanity. And even in the comics, his only love has been his obsessive yearning for Supergirl (AKA Andromeda, depending on which continuity you know -- I refer to her as "Ursa Major" in this story), nothing more adult than that. But don't cry for your bio-mechanic son quite yet -- he's calculated the probability of redemption, I'm sure. Keep reading...
Anonymous
7/28/19, 7:42 PM
Please follow on. The possibilities are fantastic: Sam's attitude vs swapping is not clear and we can expect many twists. And new characters: Trent's brother, and why not Trent's father (my personal fantasy)
Anonymous
7/28/19, 7:11 PM
I cant wait until the wrestling, football and baseball teams are together and having one big, hot orgy!
Anonymous
7/28/19, 5:05 PM
Wonder when tom will see the light
7/28/19, 4:46 PM
Poor Smartiak. His Legion counterpart is one of my favorite characters (admittedly i don't haves much familiarity with them or the comics), so seeing the Horde version go full on villain/ fallen hero makes me sad. ☹ But the Horde isn't the Legion, and the characters aren't exactly the same. and fundamentally this is a love/ redemption story for Rex and Superion. Which you are writing really well. I'll just be in the corner crying for my bio-mechanic son 😢
Bibimbap
7/28/19, 3:29 PM
I'm glad to see this series is back! It's always a big turn on, and I imagine the climax will be explosive. I was thinking that Cesar was going to be turned into something related to water sports and rubber, it's what I imagine could be a twisted kinky firefighter, but Fagcat sounds good, especially if he wears part of his uniform. Maybe the rest of the force could be debased in other ways: maybe losing their courage and guts? I don't know, you always have great ideas!
Anonymous
7/28/19, 1:59 PM
Just read the creators name : Slave Abdamelek
perroviejo53@gmail.com
7/28/19, 1:43 PM
Great story, where is chapter 10?