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samislut
7/26/19, 12:50 AM
my god, my COCK is totally throbing ,, thank you so much
nerdysuitedbaby
7/25/19, 11:51 PM
I love although I feel like this is a better written and more in-depth look into a supernatural episode that recently appeared where the small town is suck I the 1940s. Don't remember who they are and when they did and try to leave are killed. i loved that episode but felt rushed. This seems better and like some of the people are aware but just gong shopping with the motion. This is not normally my cup of tea redneck or turning straight but the fact it's a major transformation and written makes this one hot.
Tox
7/25/19, 10:57 PM
good God that was wonderful. I like the change in narration in this chapter, feels like a breath of fresh air! glad to see this continuing, thought it had great potential and hope it continues because i really wanna see where you take this!
tiny tim
7/25/19, 10:42 PM
Bracken is always a wonderful writer, I only wish this story was more homo-erotic*, even if it became homophobic...[if that makes any sense].....*big bulges, leaking pre-cum dicks, more general crudeness, etc...
Whatalooker0234
7/25/19, 10:33 PM
Dear Writer: As English is your second language, I do have to give you an amazing amount of credit for taking a chance to write then to publish. As trytoknowyou stated above: "write, put it down, reread it, edit, etc." Also, reading more will help you improve your writing. Read anything in English; such as, the newspaper, magazine, etc. because everything little thing helps. Lastly, as writer, whenever you publish something, you will have to become 'thicked skinned' about comments. Definitely read them and use the information accordingly, blowing off those you just criticize just criticize. Good luck.
Anonymous
7/25/19, 10:29 PM
I hope it continues want too see Kevin crack for sure and remember and see what his reaction is.
7/25/19, 10:19 PM
Aw man, now I want to write a story that starts with "The wizard snapped his fingers, and suddenly Tom liked cock!" Definitely enjoying the writing. Looking forward to seeing where this all goes.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/25/19, 9:09 PM
Talk about your fringe benefits. I wouldn't mind that job at all.
big
7/25/19, 5:48 PM
oofff
7/25/19, 4:03 PM
> I can’t imagine that the Universo character in this universe doesn’t know what’s going on > In my head, he was properly incarcerated and his amulet was stored in the Horde Trophy Room as a keepsake and for safety. Who knew Smartiak would be the problem...? > I was kinda hoping that Magno would have walked into the meeting room looking like the Proty version > That was my original intent. Then, after thinking about it for a while, I realized it would raise suspicions too early. I wanted the election to be the climactic moment of the chapter -- and THEN the villain reveal. If Magno had come in fully transformed, it would obviously make the girls suspicious, but it would make Rex suspicious as well -- considering Rex hadn't done the transformation. I was hoping to satisfy the reader with the Electric Lad/ Magno scene I'd included last chapter (even though I'd only dont THAT scene to satisfy a fan request, haha). Forgive me, I just wanted to build the drama differently.