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Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/25/19, 9:09 PM
Talk about your fringe benefits. I wouldn't mind that job at all.
big
7/25/19, 5:48 PM
oofff
7/25/19, 4:03 PM
> I can’t imagine that the Universo character in this universe doesn’t know what’s going on > In my head, he was properly incarcerated and his amulet was stored in the Horde Trophy Room as a keepsake and for safety. Who knew Smartiak would be the problem...? > I was kinda hoping that Magno would have walked into the meeting room looking like the Proty version > That was my original intent. Then, after thinking about it for a while, I realized it would raise suspicions too early. I wanted the election to be the climactic moment of the chapter -- and THEN the villain reveal. If Magno had come in fully transformed, it would obviously make the girls suspicious, but it would make Rex suspicious as well -- considering Rex hadn't done the transformation. I was hoping to satisfy the reader with the Electric Lad/ Magno scene I'd included last chapter (even though I'd only dont THAT scene to satisfy a fan request, haha). Forgive me, I just wanted to build the drama differently.
JJ
7/25/19, 3:58 PM
Thanks Whatalooker0234 for uploading the rest of the story. Amazing.
Camo Brute
7/25/19, 3:22 PM
I'm excited to see where this goes. The idea isn't hot so much as interesting, and I like this take on the sexuality changing theme, where it's not just "and then the wizard snapped his fingers, and suddenly tom liked cock!" But man, slow burn is right...
Anonymous
7/25/19, 3:19 PM
wow.
Cigarboy Cody
7/25/19, 2:26 PM
I was kinda hoping that Magno would have walked into the meeting room looking like the Proty version. Well maybe once he is augmented by Rex I can't imagine that the Universo character in this universe doesn't know what's going on Can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
7/25/19, 12:46 PM
want to see where this goes
Ken
7/25/19, 9:29 AM
VERY nice. Can't wait for more chapters.
Ken
7/25/19, 9:12 AM
LOVED the story. The back and forth. But surprised that Stephen never went to find/save the real Chris.