Recent Comments

tiny tim
7/25/19, 10:42 PM
Bracken is always a wonderful writer, I only wish this story was more homo-erotic*, even if it became homophobic...[if that makes any sense].....*big bulges, leaking pre-cum dicks, more general crudeness, etc...
Whatalooker0234
7/25/19, 10:33 PM
Dear Writer: As English is your second language, I do have to give you an amazing amount of credit for taking a chance to write then to publish. As trytoknowyou stated above: "write, put it down, reread it, edit, etc." Also, reading more will help you improve your writing. Read anything in English; such as, the newspaper, magazine, etc. because everything little thing helps. Lastly, as writer, whenever you publish something, you will have to become 'thicked skinned' about comments. Definitely read them and use the information accordingly, blowing off those you just criticize just criticize. Good luck.
Anonymous
7/25/19, 10:29 PM
I hope it continues want too see Kevin crack for sure and remember and see what his reaction is.
7/25/19, 10:19 PM
Aw man, now I want to write a story that starts with "The wizard snapped his fingers, and suddenly Tom liked cock!" Definitely enjoying the writing. Looking forward to seeing where this all goes.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/25/19, 9:09 PM
Talk about your fringe benefits. I wouldn't mind that job at all.
big
7/25/19, 5:48 PM
oofff
7/25/19, 4:03 PM
> I can’t imagine that the Universo character in this universe doesn’t know what’s going on > In my head, he was properly incarcerated and his amulet was stored in the Horde Trophy Room as a keepsake and for safety. Who knew Smartiak would be the problem...? > I was kinda hoping that Magno would have walked into the meeting room looking like the Proty version > That was my original intent. Then, after thinking about it for a while, I realized it would raise suspicions too early. I wanted the election to be the climactic moment of the chapter -- and THEN the villain reveal. If Magno had come in fully transformed, it would obviously make the girls suspicious, but it would make Rex suspicious as well -- considering Rex hadn't done the transformation. I was hoping to satisfy the reader with the Electric Lad/ Magno scene I'd included last chapter (even though I'd only dont THAT scene to satisfy a fan request, haha). Forgive me, I just wanted to build the drama differently.
JJ
7/25/19, 3:58 PM
Thanks Whatalooker0234 for uploading the rest of the story. Amazing.
Camo Brute
7/25/19, 3:22 PM
I'm excited to see where this goes. The idea isn't hot so much as interesting, and I like this take on the sexuality changing theme, where it's not just "and then the wizard snapped his fingers, and suddenly tom liked cock!" But man, slow burn is right...
Anonymous
7/25/19, 3:19 PM
wow.