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7/25/19, 3:24 AM
Nice! Another hot one from you. Glad to see it and looking forward to more.
Bibimbap
7/25/19, 2:21 AM
I believe that every story about mind control or transformation is, on it's core, a horror story. That's not something bad. I love horror in every art form, and to me, tf and mc stories are a kind of fantasy/horror/ erotic art form. I appreciate when is well crafted, and that's something I can see here. I don't have problems with the label 'normal' nor 'abnormal' because it's fantasy, a fiction. And a very crazy fiction, when you think about it. And even out of fiction, I don't have problems with being 'abnormal'. Being abnormal is actually something cool, at least for me. As Vincent van Gogh said: “Normality is a paved road: comfortable to walk, yes, but no flowers grow on it.” So fuck normality. I don't care if being gay is called 'abnormal'. Leaving all of that aside, I'm very intrigued, it seems that this story involves a not-so-straight transformation, and that sounds quite good and far more interesting that a totally straight tf.
Ragnarok
7/25/19, 1:05 AM
I agree with Hynothrill and love your writings. I read your Tumblr weekly and look forward to hopefully this taking a turn towards the gay. If it doesn't I'll honestly be disappointed based on how much of a turn-on your other stories are.
peter
7/25/19, 1:04 AM
would love to be brian, you did a very great job SIR
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
7/25/19, 12:43 AM
Loved it ! yeah amazing story... i would also have loved to see what the transformation would look like on a before after pic of robin :)
LongtimeFan
7/25/19, 12:35 AM
Interesting beginning. As dear Hypnothrill said, I'm not turned on by this, but your writing is always poetic and thought provoking, so I will see where it goes! As to your disclaimer at the beginning--I despise "gay to straight" stories (and don't much like the idea of straight to gay, either--give me bisexual or homoflexible or what have you), because I absolutely cannot STAND the idea of "gay as abnormal." "Don't you want to be normal?" is such a disgusting question! There's no such thing, and those who ask often mean "Don't you want to be in the majority?" There is nothing abnormal about me, or any of us. We're different, but that does not mean "not normal." As Madeleine L'Engle so brilliantly put it: "Maybe I don't like being different, but I don't want to be like everyone else, either." Can't wait to see where this goes...
7/24/19, 11:43 PM
Nice story! It seems a more than fair punishment for the three guys. They didn't die and they'll never be a threat to women again.
Anonymous
7/24/19, 11:15 PM
"Chapter 1 “Do you ever think about how much easier it would be if we were straight?” “What? Eww, no.”" you shoulda ended the story here. Its perfect.
7/24/19, 9:09 PM
this is more if turned o n by horror scenarios. If you want a fantasy p*** stoby? not going to cater. That said I do like a lot of his meta writing notes from his blog. however overall I'm just not feeling this primarily because while I do like any need to Illustrated character before we see their activities I've never been comfortable with how things have ended up with Bracken stories in terms of illustrating the character and how they eventually develop once the device has chosen how they are going to end up. basically if you want to see where I can do some of his best setting and character writing. something akin to a normal story. And get a field from something that I think he's really thought about check out his blog and follow this story. otherwise I have to admit I'm not quite feeling a lot of the excitement because I got a bias against tension that I see in his stories. I personally think it goes unfulfilled
7/24/19, 8:53 PM
Man, this is such a well-written story! I love the conflict you've set up between Kevin and Steve, which feels very real. I wouldn't say I'm exactly turned on by this story, but I am mentally stimulated, and I can't wait to read what happens next.