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Anonymous
7/24/19, 11:15 PM
"Chapter 1 “Do you ever think about how much easier it would be if we were straight?” “What? Eww, no.”" you shoulda ended the story here. Its perfect.
7/24/19, 9:09 PM
this is more if turned o n by horror scenarios. If you want a fantasy p*** stoby? not going to cater. That said I do like a lot of his meta writing notes from his blog. however overall I'm just not feeling this primarily because while I do like any need to Illustrated character before we see their activities I've never been comfortable with how things have ended up with Bracken stories in terms of illustrating the character and how they eventually develop once the device has chosen how they are going to end up. basically if you want to see where I can do some of his best setting and character writing. something akin to a normal story. And get a field from something that I think he's really thought about check out his blog and follow this story. otherwise I have to admit I'm not quite feeling a lot of the excitement because I got a bias against tension that I see in his stories. I personally think it goes unfulfilled
7/24/19, 8:53 PM
Man, this is such a well-written story! I love the conflict you've set up between Kevin and Steve, which feels very real. I wouldn't say I'm exactly turned on by this story, but I am mentally stimulated, and I can't wait to read what happens next.
abrobdl@gmail.com
7/24/19, 6:16 PM
While I loved the other stories, I found the ring to be distracting and way OP'd.
Anonymous
7/24/19, 5:31 PM
Very Interesting !
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
7/24/19, 4:08 PM
I thought it was too much for a German; , Great story, hopefully there will be more. It's kinda a pity that there are no pictures of Robin's horny career.
Mdlftr
7/24/19, 12:09 PM
I love the merging of old and new realities - same crappy boss, same building. Interesting that running, his former avocation, is now something he dislikes. Interesting perspective on his changes.
Mdlftr
7/24/19, 11:57 AM
Love the semi-archaic style of writing with the verbose descriptors: ...A slender frame sparse of muscle that often got referred to as gaunt. [Hos] long jogs brought him peace but actively quashed his ambition to get his end away. The freakish slimness he wore never pleased women to see, touch, or taste, and so he remained relegated to nights alone releasing his own anatomy from its unfulfilled desires. -This is the most convoluted way of saying "skinny runner dude who wanks every night cause he can't get girls due to his skinny runner's build " that I've ever seen! Well done!
ForgottenCradle
7/24/19, 11:41 AM
mhhhh,the wait was totally worth it! this is one of my favorite series on here. I agree to the comment above about playing more with the mayor. the new version of the ring is a bit too powerful and it kinda drains the creativity we so love from the enslavement.
Bimarguy
7/24/19, 11:16 AM
loved the concept of the cages it has a great potential in other stories , as always good work Willie