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Jul 23, 2019
nerdysuitedbaby
7/24/19, 6:05 AM
I love it can see where is was a little rushed but not enough to really take you out. Look another version with a different type of guy changed to a different outcome.
Anonymous
7/24/19, 5:39 AM
grotesque and more a horror story. I'm not against your story, but erotica it's not. I'm glad that these three scum were turned into faggot queers. I'm also glad Elam didn't actually kill them, because he's too good a man for that, although those 3 rapist deserved to die.
Anonymous
7/24/19, 5:17 AM
interesting. but what happened at the end?
Anonymous
7/24/19, 4:06 AM
hmmm so hot! would have been nice if you played with the ex-mayor more. Can you make the fire-chief into a feminized brute? or something around that idea. I want him to think he's there to serve the firemen with his body, serving them domestically and sexually. Maybe even make him and the firecrew think he's a hot sexy woman with big boobs. Thanks for this series ! I really love it
Jul 23, 2019
7/24/19, 3:30 AM
I fixed the pics. The Bobby section is not a leftover. Its purpose was to show the effects of the app. Thanks for the help.
Anonymous
7/24/19, 2:29 AM
just continue. im thinking how this potion will cover or bath the beasts and change them to serve the pharaoh. HAIL PHARAOH!
Jul 23, 2019
7/24/19, 12:55 AM
Hi Kinky, yes, would be nice, this story is a translation, makes things worse as I already thought it threw in German when you know what I mean
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
7/23/19, 11:54 PM
i don't think your giving yourself enough credit. Hell of a story Well done
David S
7/23/19, 11:52 PM
Wonderful story! I can't even decide who should win this battle, the Earthly Pharoah or the demon snake people? You're hitting the "Dark Side" versus the "Darker Side"... excellent writing!!!
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
7/23/19, 11:34 PM
The section with Bobby seems to be leftover from an earlier draft