Recent Comments

7/20/19, 11:54 AM
I appreciate the supportive words, but I'll always look at it as an opportunity missed. Honestly, it would have been another chapter entirely -- I think when I wrote this, like 15 year ago, I was eager to get it done and the prospect of an added chapter was too daunting. It's nothing I lose sleep over or that makes me dislike what actually exists here instead, it's just... (shrug). That in mind, the next two chapters are my favorites of the series! So there!
Jul 18, 2019
Anonymous
7/20/19, 6:53 AM
I loved the cop part. Like Bibimbap, I like when cop is debased and humiliated. Please make more, man..
Anonymous
7/20/19, 6:23 AM
I bet the wrestlers will eat football holes after they fucked each other. XD
Anonymous
7/20/19, 5:23 AM
Don't listen to those people saying they don't like incest. They can just not read it? Duh. You write what you want to write dude. It's not a kink I would do for real either but in a story, fuck yeah its hot. My dick seemed to like it too XD so I'm not complaining.
david
7/20/19, 5:13 AM
can't wait either....i'm on to the next chapter.
Jul 18, 2019
Anonymous
7/20/19, 4:54 AM
Great story! Definitely needs a couple grammar fixes but this is incredibly hot. Loved it!
Anonymous
7/20/19, 3:32 AM
would be good to split it into chapters, it's seriously huge when it's just one big lump
7/20/19, 2:14 AM
I didn't have a problem with it; sometimes, you gotta condense since you've made your point and need to get to thenext one...
nnnrg
7/20/19, 1:44 AM
Maybe. I think it worked fine, because even before the TSA, there would have been issues with their size and attire. The "last trip together" also works to let them do the things they're wanting to do, while being on a regular plane ... that might not be as advisable.
crashlander2002@yahoo.com
7/20/19, 12:27 AM
Good, needs to continue!