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nnnrg
7/20/19, 1:44 AM
Maybe. I think it worked fine, because even before the TSA, there would have been issues with their size and attire. The "last trip together" also works to let them do the things they're wanting to do, while being on a regular plane ... that might not be as advisable.
crashlander2002@yahoo.com
7/20/19, 12:27 AM
Good, needs to continue!
Anonymous
7/19/19, 9:03 PM
Really hot. Wish I could have joined that wrestling team in university. Will a swim/diving/gymnastics team ever join up?
7/19/19, 8:54 PM
This is not a story that I can finish reading in one go. It's that good. Is that sexy. Now I know you mention about only caring about hole but I like the fact that his mind still seems to focus. But yeah all the but action in this story is fantastic!
7/19/19, 8:22 PM
I gotta say, that of this whole series, this chapter is my least favorite -- I dropped the ball. I was so excited to get them home to do what I'd planned with them there, that I purposefully avoided the actual trip home. In retrospect, I would rewrite this chapter and have them go home the way they came, on a regular mainstream airplane (maybe I'd allow them first class). I really wanted to avoid them interacting with "real" people until they were back in Kansas, but looking back on it now, I realize I was just a lazy writer.
Stephan
7/19/19, 7:50 PM
Another great transformation. And now I am wondering who the muscular rubberman in the shadows is. Can't wait for the next installment!
Jul 18, 2019
Bibimbap
7/19/19, 4:32 PM
I loved the part of the officer, I love stories with cops debasing themselves and trashing his uniforms. It was quite good, but it all happened too quickly!
Jul 18, 2019
Anonymous
7/19/19, 2:22 PM
So, the ranch they go to work for is a 'male whore house' and the pills gives them the body to work hours and hours without any erectile dificult.
7/19/19, 8:29 AM
Your stories are the epitome of literature arts! I can't believe I missed your story before.
Anonymous
7/19/19, 8:10 AM
loved it, love race tfs!