loved it, love race tfs!

Thanks so so much! This is one of the hottest erotic stories i have ever read. i love stories that are so much more than just the sex. Context, character and plot development are so important for creating that mental place where the story and the eroticism really come to life, and grabs you by the mind and the balls and pulls hard. Plots with seduction and mind control are among my favorites. As one who grew up being taught what a man should be by "old school" standards, and is now an acknowledged bottom submissive, and wannabe slut, i understand that tension between Brian's original thinking and his gradually accumulated new perspective. While i could understand this tension, Brian with whom i very much relate was unaware. i had this semi-conscious sense that Brian was in trouble, as Amir predicted. Part of me wanted to warn him, but for the most part i was drawn personally into wanting the nefarious mind control deception to work, because i wanted to be seduced and taught to obey and serve according to the same plan Brian fell for. i love to experience hypnosis myself with the sense of falling out of self-control and into the control of the mind control Master who encourages submission, obedience, service, and devotion. i think i may have subconsciously felt the same kind of enthralling mental and physical pleasure reading the story as i do reaching deeper levels of trance and obedience. This is at least the 2nd time i've bookmarked your link to Patreon. i expect if we had not had major expenses lately with anticipation of more to come, i would have signed up already. i fully expect i will. i want to support your talent financially. In the meantime, perhaps my enthusiasm and encouragement will contribute a little. Thanks again for sharing this particular story and your imagination and writing talent. ~david P.S. Perhaps there is one other thing i can share which you might enjoy, and hopefully will be able to inspire other stories. i have a bdsm blog at https://boi98229.bdsmlr.com/ i think you will enjoy.

This is so good and I love it. I love such humiliations. I checked your other stories. Why didn't you complete the backfire, man? It was hot..

Its always a pleasure to see some incest that involves the father

I'm going to chime in with another comment. I work p/t in a restaurant. There was a baseball camp going on locally and the restaurant had several late teenage aged sons and their Dads sitting at tables in the restaurant. All I could think of were their new lives under the control of the Masters. And baseball players are always a treat to behold.

Go with it! Let the creative juices flow!!

Great story!! Loved it!!

Very glad so many of you enjoyed this story! I've had the concept in mind for a while but finally took a stab to write it. I'd originally planned a multi part story but decided to compress it into one go. Surprised at the number of people who want the red pill. The whole pill idea came to me right at the end, and leaving it up to the reader on which pill each bro takes. Basically the conditioned muscle slaves have to choose their slavery and weather or not they keep their awareness. I also intended that the blue pill would take away their erections again making them total muscle bottoms, while the red would let them keep it along with their minds, but now I'm thinking that the blue will only let them get hard if their master commands it

great start, i like your thinking! Maybe he bumps into a homophob bully. takes him down a few pegs... makes him service guys in a gay biker bar bathroom each night or does a gay webcam show from home performing whatever the views ask (cucumber dildo, shaves pubic hair, gets prince albert etc) maybe gets a job in an adult bookstore cleaning the cum up... Also like the other suggestion of the gym jocks working the muscles including their asshole muscles riding dildoes...

cool