Good, needs to continue!

Really hot. Wish I could have joined that wrestling team in university. Will a swim/diving/gymnastics team ever join up?

This is not a story that I can finish reading in one go. It's that good. Is that sexy. Now I know you mention about only caring about hole but I like the fact that his mind still seems to focus. But yeah all the but action in this story is fantastic!

I gotta say, that of this whole series, this chapter is my least favorite -- I dropped the ball. I was so excited to get them home to do what I'd planned with them there, that I purposefully avoided the actual trip home. In retrospect, I would rewrite this chapter and have them go home the way they came, on a regular mainstream airplane (maybe I'd allow them first class). I really wanted to avoid them interacting with "real" people until they were back in Kansas, but looking back on it now, I realize I was just a lazy writer.

Another great transformation. And now I am wondering who the muscular rubberman in the shadows is. Can't wait for the next installment!

I loved the part of the officer, I love stories with cops debasing themselves and trashing his uniforms. It was quite good, but it all happened too quickly!

So, the ranch they go to work for is a 'male whore house' and the pills gives them the body to work hours and hours without any erectile dificult.

Your stories are the epitome of literature arts! I can't believe I missed your story before.

loved it, love race tfs!

Thanks so so much! This is one of the hottest erotic stories i have ever read. i love stories that are so much more than just the sex. Context, character and plot development are so important for creating that mental place where the story and the eroticism really come to life, and grabs you by the mind and the balls and pulls hard. Plots with seduction and mind control are among my favorites. As one who grew up being taught what a man should be by "old school" standards, and is now an acknowledged bottom submissive, and wannabe slut, i understand that tension between Brian's original thinking and his gradually accumulated new perspective. While i could understand this tension, Brian with whom i very much relate was unaware. i had this semi-conscious sense that Brian was in trouble, as Amir predicted. Part of me wanted to warn him, but for the most part i was drawn personally into wanting the nefarious mind control deception to work, because i wanted to be seduced and taught to obey and serve according to the same plan Brian fell for. i love to experience hypnosis myself with the sense of falling out of self-control and into the control of the mind control Master who encourages submission, obedience, service, and devotion. i think i may have subconsciously felt the same kind of enthralling mental and physical pleasure reading the story as i do reaching deeper levels of trance and obedience. This is at least the 2nd time i've bookmarked your link to Patreon. i expect if we had not had major expenses lately with anticipation of more to come, i would have signed up already. i fully expect i will. i want to support your talent financially. In the meantime, perhaps my enthusiasm and encouragement will contribute a little. Thanks again for sharing this particular story and your imagination and writing talent. ~david P.S. Perhaps there is one other thing i can share which you might enjoy, and hopefully will be able to inspire other stories. i have a bdsm blog at https://boi98229.bdsmlr.com/ i think you will enjoy.