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7/18/19, 10:47 AM
needless to say this is a common idea especially in this venue but you executed with a kind of fun that either in refined simple writing or elaborate engagement makes it really hot and makes me very curious. This is where you have to play it out running to those bisexuals if only as a background bit. Or come across those lesbians if only as a setup. And of course Explorer how the alpha deals with his little circle. Will they be a circle a harem a herd or something else like a monkey Colony or something. it doesn't even have to be that deep just wide and diverse with the anchors being the characters that we've come to be able to enjoy. Such as seeing our basketball player head back to the real world and what happens when he doesn't have his Alpha reinforcing him but he still feels the attraction. What do others think and do they notice? And if they notice what's happened to them and interim and what are their concerns and responses? this can obviously Drive actions until inevitably they fall to our alpha or maybe not.
Jul 18, 2019
7/18/19, 9:01 AM
Beautiful, but the struggle to regain who they once were to become a being of both worlds would be a better ending.
Anonymous
7/18/19, 8:50 AM
a little sad it's incest themed, idk why everyone is so obsessed with incest but i find it super creepy. You're my fav author on this site so i was kinda hoping you weren't gonna do a straight up incest story. Outside of the off putting topic the writing is solid as always.
Anonymous
7/18/19, 8:46 AM
holy shit please write more puppy stuff. youre fucking amazing at it.
7/18/19, 4:00 AM
Five in all categories rated above. Fantastic story.
Evan
7/18/19, 3:56 AM
I enjoyed this. Congrats on the courage to post. It's not an easy thing to do. And it was a great story. Great fantasy story, your ideas are fun and hot. Hope to see another story from you soon.
Elm
7/18/19, 3:52 AM
I loved the plot twist! cant wait to see where tbis is going
7/18/19, 3:37 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments. I may do a prequel once I'm complete with this story.... I am on Chapter 7 in writing and I've enjoyed writing this story more than most of my others. I hope you all keep enjoying :)!
7/18/19, 3:32 AM
Thanks folks for the kind words. Writing is such a fun escape from the trash fire that life can be sometimes. Thanks for the wait and for the great response. ANd thanks to those of you that send in emails, messages on tumblr and comment on the stories. I read them and reply to all the ones I can. I appreciate them greatly.
Anonymous
7/18/19, 3:29 AM
Never cease to amaze me! Great!!