Recent Comments

halibobo97@gmail.com
7/17/19, 12:34 AM
agree! whoever wrote this, thank you for your great work! one of the hottest stories i read in recent years i am glad it was picked from archive. Does anyone know the who the author is so I can read his other pieces?
7/16/19, 7:57 PM
Hah, no worries bro. Yeah, whenever you want to give it a go, lemme know and I'll show.
Anonymous
7/16/19, 6:44 PM
very good story . something to think about for next is try having smaller paragraphs; it would make for an easier read. Also noticed a few grammar mistakes but not enough to distract from the story . hope you write again soon because you have great ideas.
Anonymous
7/16/19, 6:36 PM
Love this! I love a good chuckle now and again on this site
Anonymous
7/16/19, 6:25 PM
This is wonderful. I love underwear stories. I'm looking forward so much to the next part. (I'm not sure what this "Useless" comment is supposed to mean. I wish people would right a little more in their comments so we know if it's a criticism or sarcasm, etc.). In any case, I am really loving this series!!
nycboot
7/16/19, 5:40 PM
Wow! Great story! So arousing and the build up of tension was very well done. (I was hoping the beast's cum would have transformed Abraham in someway but it's fine as is.)
screamingmoist
7/16/19, 4:56 PM
Thanks for reading! i just caught the blurb at the end, and to clarify, this is just chapter 2 of the book.
firesix
7/16/19, 4:07 PM
Wow. Wow. WOW!
Anonymous
7/16/19, 3:39 PM
next month I will buy your book, I don't have the money this month
7/16/19, 2:08 PM
Hey, Derek, cool that you're up for a tag-team story at some point. I probably shouldn't have suggested it right now, since things are hectic for me IRL, but hopefully we can do it once things settle down. I guess doing it as a community story would be the simplest way logistically, since I don't know if the system would allow two writers to contribute chapters to the same series. Maybe Martin can help us in that regard.