Recent Comments

Ganimedes_MX
7/15/19, 7:10 PM
Very hot!!! I need next chapter!
Anonymous
7/15/19, 5:33 PM
I hope to see a part 3
Ganimede_MX
7/15/19, 5:11 PM
Fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
7/15/19, 4:13 PM
Very stimulating! Great writing. Very scary, too!
Oct 14, 2010
Anonymous
7/15/19, 4:01 PM
Hot, hot, hot!
Anonymous
7/15/19, 3:59 PM
I want to read the ending...please!
Anonymous
7/15/19, 3:54 PM
Not bad. The story could use some editing to make it more interesting, especially the wanking parts.
Anonymous
7/15/19, 3:39 PM
Super hot! Wow, what an ending! Great story, too!
Jul 15, 2017
Anonymous
7/15/19, 3:36 PM
very good
Boi4U
7/15/19, 2:58 PM
OMG! HOT AS HELL! This is a near perfect smut story. Derek's going from arrogant pussy chaser, yuk... lol, to a prime, grade-A cum guzzling, cock slut extraordinare football player stud, the big man on campus, was a well written journey. Some stuff, such as the nipple clamps *yikes* and the chasity device *ugh* are not my thing, but, your clever use of them in the story was brilliant and fit in smoothly as training devices to aid turning Derek into the perfect lil' bottom bitch, submissive jock he was born to be. Now, this is not a criticism per se, but the reason I wrote this was near perfect is that I was a bit disappointed that you didn't include a scintillating sex scene with Derek and his English teacher (and the possible fuck orgy I thought would happen). I also was hoping for Derek in his jockstrap getting pounced and plowed. Otherwise, you created a mighty fine homoerotic fantasy feast for our eyes and minds. Thanks and high fives. 😆😉👏👅👍